摘要
Fang Xue was a 23-year-old human businesswoman from Earth, but after the destruction of Earth due to a fight between divine beings, her life changes drastically.
Rejected by the God of Reincarnation and forced to reincarnate in the body of a young half-demon and half-human girl abandoned in the most dangerous place in the mortal world.
She persists and swears revenge, and her prayers are heard by fate, which brings Fang Xue and Ancient Goddess of Chaos together as they pave their way to the top with corpses of Gods, Demons, Buddhas and Humans.
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English is not my primary language
~The cover is not my own~
My first time writing a story. Please rate and comment on what could be improved.
~YURI ROMANCE? Yes, but it is not the focus.~
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This is a really good read. I like the emotions the characters shows and the direction it’s going in. I like how the mc have to solve her own problems and overcome them. The relationship with the goddess is great too. And the goddess is not there there to sovle all the mc problems, like a cliche grandpa ring that always solves thing once things goes wrong. The goddess is like a cool best friend that keeps you grounded and you need for a long journey. But the novel is still in the beginning
This book is super good in many ways and I want to see how the characters develop so if you like I good book read this trust me
Writing Quality: 4/5 Stability of Updates: 3/5 Story Development: 4/5 Character Design: 3/5 World Background: 3/5 === I'll be giving my general thoughts as a reader. First and foremost, I love this novel. It's the type of novel I've been wanting to read the most. The story itself is well written with structured sentences and no spelling mistakes. While update stability has been lacking of late, It's tolerable. While the story can be generic, I find it charming in a weird way. Anyways, I'm not a reviewer nor a critic, so I am not able to give constructive criticism. And I do not think it is my place to do so as this is after all your story. But what I can say is that I do like the story. <3
[img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update] So far the story alright. The Mc is not some vexatious or naive heroine. I like how shes made to a prudent and manipulative one (tho from her past/s its obvious she will be). I still can't say about the story development tho it's still early but it already hooked my interest based on the early setting of the plot. The world background is unique to say atleast(I just love the element of chaos(anything related to)). For the romance tho kinda please dont rush it like any others in their stories. And just wanna say your story has an infinite potential tho some grammatical or typographical error(a little to none) can be fixed but overall you can grasp the idea. Sorry can't give you 5 stars the story is still the beginning anyway. Love this tho[img=recommend]