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摘要
They were forced into hiding, but now it is time to return to the light. Their territory was taken, it’s only right they get it back. For the death of their loved ones, the Asago Clan will eliminate your entire lineage.
No one would have assumed that a clan of six that was on the verge of dying out would become so formidable. This is their history.
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Naruto Fan-Fic for fun.
I own the cover, do not post/use it anywhere.
Unstable Updates.
Warning States Peroid - 2nd Shinobi war ONLY.
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- 寫作品質
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寫檢討
The grammar is good. The story is slow pace as I usually don't mind it but when I barely read about the Mc and see his family which I don't care about I find it extremely boring. Like I'm here to see the Mc growth it's like almost 30 chapters in and still waiting to know what's going on...what period r we in what is the training like? All of that r things I would prefer to read and not about whatever fight his family is getting into. Also, I know nothing about the Mc who was he before personally wise. Wt r his goals in this world. Why did he choose that as his powers when the question had no rules so if he wanted he could've also been a god? I was excited after the initial start but after a while, I got bored the story turned into something I'm reading n have no clue what was going on and why am reading this when it was not interesting anymore. All in all, it had a good premise but it delve into boredom after a while. I've read worst and I've read good novels. This int the worst but very far from the best...like very.
Waiting for the new chapter updates ❤️ Best regards to Author-san! (Insert: Probably one of the best Naruto-verse fanfic I've read) Keep this up. -New Supporter and Reader
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