As Sasuke With 10-Quest System

LV 4

Intense_Gaming_5908

It's a bad fan fiction. Character feels like NPC but the bad version.

LV 14

Transhumanist

There are many plot holes and author's handwaving trying to smooth the plot. But all it does is make the world become an even more irrational mess than the original story.

LV 1

reza_Asgari

there are lots of forced plot no detailed the idea of the plot is amazing that is why i still read it romance is odd ( It feels a little awkward for me) also the plot is like ONLY sasuke is getting stronger

LV 1

Brady_Lustlara

The story is just weird. The MC is trying to be unique in taking over sound village which is honestly stupid because it literally has no powerful people or things. The female lead is just some random mob chick who simps after the MC which is a waste because of all the potential real characters in the shinobi world. just an all around letdown of a fic because of the ma's hairbrained schemes somehow working even with bad acting on his part.

LV 3

PurpleRoseImmortal

5 Stars for myself. Typical author behavior. If you like this novel, make sure to give a review and check out my Patreon for advanced chapters.

LV 2

DaoistCGid7j

Good, but there are no strong details, the romance is trite, and the battles end quickly, as if he is focusing only on the hero becoming stronger. I hope you improve the details of the entire story. If you solve this problem, the story will become much better.

LV 2

SlumberSeal

This novel is the literal definition of "Gold in a Miner's hand". The idea and planning are great. No one has ever thought of doing a fanfiction on Hebi Sasuke but unfortunately, the author of this fanfic is a rookie and can't bring out the true potential of this book. 5 stars either way. Get good author

LV 10

Luizz_Ricardo

Constructive criticism, author, the idea of ​​this whole fanfic is good, the mission is cool, and everything else, but the problem is your writing, your writing is very simple and has no details, no depth, the story also moves too quickly.

LV 4

Theory_18

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LV 1

NeaCambelt

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LV 4

jan_Zaib

thanks for dropping this master piece. Please keep updating this work ...

LV 4

MD_Toriqul_Islam

overall the story is engaging. recommendable.

LV 1

Xavierzelaya2

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