摘要
Jack traveled to the earth a thousand years later and found that this place was no longer the original social system!
Only strength could survive!
As a low-level warrior, how could he change his fate?
Ding Dong!
Talent replication system awakened!
The ice talent copied successfully!
The recovery talent copied successfully!
Ding Dong!
Discovered the special talent swords return to the sect!
Copy!
Discovered the increase in special talent abilities!
Copy!
However, when Jack successfully entered the Kaya Warrior Academy, he discovered there are so many mysteries in the world!
Perhaps after opening these mysterious veils, he would be able to understand the true meaning of the world!
Thus, he would become the unique king of this world!
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6評論
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
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寫檢討
Very cliche plot. A lot of cringe moments. .....................................................................................................................................................................................
my note speaks for me . ( i gave 5 stars for updating stability , this should make it even clearer ) .......................................
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Honestly I have no idea why am I writing this and why I wasted time to read it....however little I have read. 1. It is premium :D 2. Grammar has mistakes ( which premium should NOT be...or at least to be very little ) 3. It is stereotypical story. Nothing new or interesting 4. The way it is written is really and I mean REALLY stupid and hard to read without cringing ( "Author" * bleh* if you want to call him/her that must be 12 years old or something or I really dont know ) 5. There is no proper description of the characters or world....Character? - name, slight description like hair color or something....World? - world where strong rule and might makes right...done The only + I would give this is that since the story has just started, it has regular updates but only complete and utter fool wouls pay for that