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94.28% As A GAMER In One Piece / Chapter 31: CH-31 - NEW CREW MEMBER?

章節 31: CH-31 - NEW CREW MEMBER?

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AN:- I WILL BE USING THE VIVRE CARD INFORMATIONS FOR SOME STUFF, SO MAKE SURE YOU GUYS KNOW WHAT VIVRE CARDS ARE ALL ABOUT. BUT IF YOU GUYS DON'T, THEN DO ASK ME, SINCE I CAN EXPLAIN IT TO YOU GUYS. ANYWAYS, HOPE YOU GUYS LIKE CHAPTER 31.

[PREVIOUSLY ON GAMER PIECE]

all of us go to the shore and get on the Merry which i summoned, get on it and start sailing, leaving this island with 3 balls and a stick. weird not gonna lie.

we finally leave that island, sailing towards the next island. during the time, similar whethers were fucking with us, while me and Usopp were inventing something. but, i had my interest peaked when i tried to Subdue the Seven-Star sword-

"there we go!" Usopp takes off his Goggles and marvels at the creations Me and him did.

"Oh Yeah, Finally.!" I grin, sitting back down to check out our latest work. a Lightning beam Star. a small bullet that contains lightning in it, so when it is shot and has had impact with its target, not only will it wound the target, but also electrocute the target from inside out.

This was done by re-calibrating the mechanics of the thunder dials, making the container that Stores Lightning much smaller and inserting it in a bullet. I give it a charge with my Lightning Manipulation, And it stores the electricity, before releasing it on contact.

Honestly, Usopp's arsenal is incredibly deep, thanks to my help. Not only does he have a much better kabuto than his canonical self, the bullets that he has access to, such as Lightning bullets, Jet Dials, Thunder dials, and Axe dials. Honestly, if I were to compare him with Post timeskip Usopp before his Haki Bloom, This Version of Usopp might have a decent chance at winning.

The only reason he might lose is due to the knowledge of Canon Usopp with the unpredictable Plant attacks, and Muscle mass.

Anyways, Life drains. I had absorbed the skill book before leaving, so I could have some time to brainstorm how to use it properly.

LIFE DRAIN - ACTIVE - (Lv1) (EXP - 0%)

DESCRIPTION:-

This skill allows the user to drain life force or energy from a target to heal themselves or regain some form of energy. The amount of Life Force drained is random.

Effects:-

It Absorbs Life Force and adds it to the User's.

Can Absorb Mana and Turn it into Life Force

Can also turn Life Force Into Mana

While the first effect is interesting, the second effect is what I am keeping my eye on. If I can somehow turn Life Force into Mana, I could increase my reserves of it. 

but, something is on my mind, Can i absorb my own Mana to increase my Life Force? Like creating an object that has the capacity to somehow store my mana when I imbue it, and after a little while, absorb the Contained Mana to change it into Life force?

Maybe, but for me to even try that, I need to Level Up My Life Drain Skill, so grinding time.

I created an I.D for a new dungeon that I got thanks to Enel Slaving away at my Combined Dungeons to get me Potions and Skill books. i absorb all my skill books i had obtained through Auto Loot-

LIFE DRAIN - ACTIVE - (Lv10) (EXP - 0%)

10 books on Life Drain Skill, but these extra levels gave me enough Knowledge on how This Skill works. I hear growling, so I turn around to see a Wolf twice its size, standing around 12 feet tall. The fur is Silver, with Red eyes.

SILVER WOLF

Lv 29

HP - 4900/4900

MP - 1000

A Silver Wolf Born in the Depthness Of a Dungeon. It has Fire Abilities and can set its teeths on fire to attack and injure its prey. 

It growls at me-

and jumps with its fangs out, trying to bite me. it's fangs envelope with Fire while i stand still, Generating Lightning from my Hands.I thrust it when the Wolf comes near me, stabbing it through the mouth-

I Use my Life Drain skill, making the Lightning mana in my hand dissipate. a wave of pure energy comes to my hands, and gets absorbed inside of it. 

+30,000 EXP

....Nothing except the EXP. I check the Skill window to see if there is something new.

LIFE DRAIN - ACTIVE - (Lv10) (EXP - 0.2%)

DESCRIPTION:-

This skill allows the user to drain life force or energy from a target to heal themselves or regain some form of energy. The amount of Life Force drained is Random.

Effects:-

It Absorbs Life Force and adds it to the User's.

Can Absorb Mana and Turn it into Life Force

Can turn Life Force Into Mana

There is a Percentage of Chance to get the skill of the target (Depends on the Level - Current % - 1%)

oh damn! I noticed the new Effect it has, which seemed to be available after Lv10. so, if I get this skill to Lv100, I have a 10% chance? That's awesome. 

*GRRRR*

I turn around to see all 6 Silver Wolves standing behind a tree, all of their fangs are in flames, and they are staring at me like they want to kill me. I cracked my neck, deciding to Use all the skills I have acquired recently, like Fishmen Karate, Giants Strength, etc.

hmm, could i combine Fishmen Karate and Water Manipulation somehow?....decisions, decisions. i check my Skill <CREATE I.D> while dodging a bite to the head-

CREATE INSTANT DUNGEON - ACTIVE - (Lv49) (EXP - 90%)

DESCRIPTION:-

Instant Dungeon Create is a skill that allows the user to create a protected space. Stronger instant dungeons may be created according to level.

Currently Available ID list:-

Empty ID :- Monsters - None

Zombie ID:- Monsters - Zombie

Ghost ID:- Monsters - Ghost

Mixed ID:- Monsters - Zombies, Ghost

Rainbow Mist ID:- Monsters - None

Wolf OF:- Monsters - Wolf

Skeleton ID:- Monsters - Skeletons

Orc ID:- Monsters - Goblin,Orc

Elemental ID:- Monsters - Elemental Spirits 

Well, I might as well grind in those other dungeons later on. though, what has happened to Enel anyways? I have been getting no Loot for quite some time. Did he die? or did he figure out that it is impossible to get out of the Dungeon?

eh, who knows- No, Who cares?

*IN A DIFFERENT DUNGEON*

.....silence-

*CHOMP*

A crunch sound evolves on an island. the island sinking to the ground, having Various Holes in it. inside the island and in a jungle, sits a person who is-

*CRUNCH*

eating a dead wolf's intestines. The person, Enel wipes his mouth, his belly full. He turns his head behind him, noticing creatures coming for him. a Legion Zombie ( A mass of Zombies Coming together ) , A Black Wolf ( a wolf with elemental Powers and a Horn connected to it) , A Chaos Elemental (a form of swirling, ever-changing mass of energy, with flames, water currents, rocky fragments, gusts of wind, bolts of lightning, and frosty mists constantly shifting and merging within its body) and-

"stop annoying me, you Worms-" 

A Pressure exudes from Enel, Hitting the creatures surrounding him. their Eyes (If it is visible in the case of Chaos Elemental) Roll back to their Head, dropping into the ground like a sack of potatoes. The Chaos Elemental becomes unstable, exploding into Particles that evaporate into the air. Enel gets up, knowing what to do-

"Electro Clones-" Enel stretches his hand towards the fallen Monsters, Shooting a compressed electric ball towards them. the ball splits into many different small balls, all right above the Monster's corpse. when the Corpse turns into Particles and leaves behind the loot-

The Lightning balls all expand, taking a form similar to that Of Enel but with No Skin or organs visible. a pure Body of energy. Enel Flips his hand, making the lightning Somehow grab onto all the loot and 'teleport' the loot right at Enel's feet-

before Enel bows down and Grabs all the loot, making it somehow disappear. He looks in the air, and then disappears, arriving right above the island. He raises his hand, knowing that there is no more inhabitant in this island, and sends a Lightning ball to the sky-

which starts heating up the air, moving it towards one other. while Enel Manipulates the ion in his lightning to spread on all the heated air, creating a cloud. The lightning ball mixes with the Clouds that have been created, making it black-

"Kirin-" Enel pushes his hand down, and from the black clouds, a dragon made out of lightning, as big as the Island below comes out, quickly moving towards the island and enveloping it-

*BOOM*

*ZZZZZ*

Destroying the entire island. Enel then looks up once again, a deep-seated anger enveloping his face.

"RELEASE ME YOU CIRCUMCISED WORM!!" ENel screams to the heavens, but no one responds to him. He has been stuck in this world for who knows how many hours. He doesn't even know if it is hours, days, months or even years. He didn't even count.

this world is hell, since no one is here. After destroying Sky island, he came to the blue seas, but other than Empty Islands with Architectures, there is not a single human being. The only living beings are those pathetic monsters, which somehow have increased from different types of the same species to entirely different species.

He has been killing them for so long that he has started to eat them just so he could survive. Survive Until the day when he comes out of this hell, where he will meet that bastard and Kill-

No, he won't kill him. He would slowly Shock him, making him scream in pain. Enel has plans, plans that involve Frying Rai's Nerves, Blinding him, ripping apart his muscles, burning him, making him deaf, and so on. he has made many plans, which he will implement-

HE WILL IMPLEMENT, EVEN IF IT IS THE LAST THING HE WILL DO! It doesn't matter if Endless Varth exists, he will Kill him. that's his goal. that's his Motive. that's his reason to live, that's his-

Enel takes a deep breath, calming himself down. He knows there is no use being angry right now, he will wait for his chance, bid his time until then. He has made preparations, and he is gonna execute it. Enel flies to the nearest Island, deciding to Destroy it after looting everything that it contains.

Until then, Enel decides to check his progress.

"Status-"

*ON THE GOING MERRY*

"huh?" I turned around, not understanding why I got a foreboding feeling all of a sudden, and it went in the same second. weird. I look back at Nami, who is giving me a blank stare while I ask her to repeat what she said to me.

"I'm sorry, what were you saying?" Nami sighs, annoyed at having to repeat the question once more.

"we are reaching the Island, you know something about it?" I turn to look at the silhouette of the island coming towards us, and I shrug.

"I don't know. Now Normally After Jaya, we would have reached Water 7, but Sky Island Kinda ruined my sense of directions, so I am not sure what island we are on UNTIL we reach there." I walked away from her while hearing her sigh in disappointment. 

"Hey Big Bro?" I turn to look over to Aisa, who has taken to calling me Big bro. i don't know WHY, but imma just roll with it.

"Sup?" He turns to look at the corner of the Island we are approaching, and she looks confused.

"uh, there are people that way!" She points to the Corner of the island. I look at her confused, why is she even telling us about that?

"okay? so?" She looked at me, her confusion turned into concern. i look back at the place she pointed to, and My Range of Observation isn't that high yet. Something I have noticed with Aisa is that it has a range that Encompasses an entire island.

and somehow, her Observation Haki allows her To " Hear the voices" of everyone around her. meaning, she can literally hear conversations, something that is not possible for Normal OBservation Haki users, Unless she has Ad-

"Weight Anchor." Zoro exclaims, dropping the Ship's anchor when we reach the island. I look at him, and nod. Luffy, Usopp, and Bentham all jump off, running towards the island. Nami tells them to stop, but they don't. I look towards Wyper, who notices my look and glares at me.

i continue my stare, which eventually makes him relent, jumping off the ship and using his Skaters to follow the kid trio. 

"This island is too plain." Sanji comments, trying to make us leave this island. He needs some women to look at, and while Looking at nami and Robin all day is the best thing to happen to him, he needs more women in his life.

"Hmm, Yeah-" i try to remember if there was a place like this that was specified in Canon or in movies, but my mind comes up blank. I feel my pants tugging, and look down at Aisa holding my pants, looking behind us.

"B-Big Bro, The People-" Before Aisa could complete the sentence, a metal clanking sound is heard, and to both the sides of Merry, a Cat-Like giant arm extends, grabbing onto the land and blocking our Path.

"Hehehe! Gotcha. Now, we wait until your captain accepts the Davy back Fight!" A scrawny Man speaks up in front of a HUGE amount of people. He looks down on us, and I feel like I have seen him before. but the words catch my interest-

"This is the "people" right?" I ask Aisa for Confirmation, and she nods in fear. I look back at the dude, noticing his name, Itomimizu.Itomimizu is a scrawny man with very distinct facial features. He has a round, pink nose, no chin and a broad mouth that makes up most of his face.He wears a purple shirt, yellow gloves, light-yellow trousers, black boots and a striped toque covering his face down to his nose. It has holes for the eyes.

"Davy back fight?" Robin speaks up, asking for confirmation. A woman with wavy Red hair nods with a smug grin.

"Yeah, the same." The woman's name is Gina. Gina is a normal sized, attractive woman with short, wavy red hair reaching down to her neck. She also wears the same mask as Itomimizu and a dark colored shirt with straps over the shoulders and short shorts with a belt, and long gloves.

not only her and Itomimizu, but all the members visible have similar masks. These clown-looking people are the Foxy Pirates, and it seems we are in Long Ring Long Land. that means-

"What is Davy Back Fight?" Chopper, who doesn't know much about anything Pirate related, asks Curiously. I notice that he isn't panicking. not only him, but even Usopp isn't hiding himself inside the ship, though his legs are shaking.

"Davy Back Fight is a Pirate Game with the intention of Taking other Crew's members to bolster their own." Zoro speaks up, causing Chopper to snap his head back to Zoro in horror.

"this is a game that has started from the Pirate Island, and where the crew's Captains Decide on whom to recruit from the other Crew." Sanji exhales the smoke from his cigarette.

"This Game is played by many crews who are in desperate need of Crew Members for their Ship." Robin Smiles while talking to Chopper, which freaks not only him, but also Usopp.

"B-But if we don't accept the fight, then we don't need to play the game right?" Usopp tries to be optimistic, but I crush his hopes and dreams and shit.

"Well, it doesn't matter what the crew wants, if the captain accepts the fight, then the crew HAS to play the game, no objections." Usopp falls down to the ground in tears, knowing that Luffy is the person who will Accept this fight, since he only sees it as a fun game.

"Aww, are you guys giving up BEFORE we even fought?" a fatass man with a gray mustache laughs, his stomach shaking with the movement. the dudes name is Kibagare, who He is dressed in elaborate pira-

"Hey, since you are part of this crew, it means You LOST right? so, shut up fatass bitch!" i raise my middle finger at him, causing him to go red in embarrassment and Anger, while his crewmates laugh at him.

*BANG*

HIDDEN QUEST CREATED

DAVY BACK FIGHT

The Strawhat Pirates and The Foxy Pirates are in a Davy Back Fight, where each crew has a chance to get new team-mates. win the Competition.

Rewards:- 1,000,000,000 EXP, SKILL BOOK <TACTICAL USAGE> , Beris - 100,000,000

??? - 1,000,000,000 EXP, SKILL BOOK <FISHMAN KARATE> , SKILL BOOK <GIANT STRENGTH>, ALL WEAPONS AND ITEMS, Beris - 100,000,000

??? - 1,000,000,000 EXP, SKILL BOOK <NEUROMA PROTON MANIPULATION> , ALL WEAPONS AND ITEMS.

the sound of gunfire is heard, and the entire Foxy Pirates start celebrating. They land on the Island, opening stalls and other varieties that are somewhat interesting. The Bang Sound indicated that Luffy has accepted the challenge.

"YOU DUMBASS!! AT LEAST THINK BEFORE DECIDING ANYTHING!" Nami slams her fist in Luffy's head, with Conqueror's Coating being subconsciously used. Luffy hits the ground in pain, holding his head.

"OW!OW!OW" he tries to rub the area where the impact was, while Nami huffs. I honestly thought she was gonna beat the absolute living shit out of Luffy, but it seems she only did it once. Hey, character development.

"Did you think before you decided to go along with this farce? Do you even know WHAT Davy Back Fight is?" Usopp grabs his head in annoyance and fear, hyping himself up thinking that if they Lose, He is the one who is gonna be chosen first.

"Yeah, it is a game where whoever wins gets a crewmate from the opponent." Luffy smiles like there is no reason to be afraid at all. Nami tries to smack him once again, but she holds herself, breathing out air and trying to calm herself.

"What if we lose?" Chopper, while has had much character development and has matured somewhat, still has the same core as the Canon Chopper, a childish dude who is fearful.

"Well, We Just don't have to Lose then." Luffy gives a confident grin, making Zoro smirk. While everyone gets some kind of confidence, I audibly sigh, knowing that the train of thought that Luffy has is stupid and kinda dangerous.

"We thought the same with Zephyr, but we know how that turned out!" It seems that Luffy has some kind of social cues, since he is able to pick up on my sarcasm and his grin falls.

"....nevermind, i'll figure something out!" Honestly, I cannot see Luffy NOT smiling, it's weird. Luffy's smile comes back up, and he gets up and pats my back.

" I know you will, that's why I accepted this fight!" I look at him amused while Usopp looks gobsmacked at Luffy's response. I decided to not comment on it, as it is amusing to See Luffy 'lying' Like Usopp. I notice from the Corner of my eye, three people walking towards us, so me and the entire crew turn to them.

"Fefefefe! Well, let's commerce the Games shall we?" Foxy of the Foxy Pirates speaks up. Foxy is a tall albeit stout man with skinny arms and legs. He has an almost cleft lip-like mouth and a unique hairstyle, with his hair split into two spikes pointing upwards. He has thick, triangular eyebrows, and is almost always seen grinning. His nose is also colored red, and it is long, similar to Usopp.

"Shesheshe! It's Commence Captain, Not Commerce." a huge gorilla-like human Named Hamburg speaks up. 

"Ugh! My Language isn't Proper!" Foxy falls to the ground, depressed. a slender Woman puts her hand on His shoulder, and seeing this, Sanji's eyes turn into Hearts.

"Hey Hamburg, Don't insult Cap'n Like that!" Porsche is a slender young woman with dark blue hair, blue eyes, and a long pointed nose. She is seen wearing a pink jumpsuit with extremely puffed pant legs, which is unzipped on the top to reveal a bikini top beneath it. She rubs Foxy's shoulders, trying to console him.

"Hell Yeah, Bring it on!" While Luffy himself is weirded out by what is going on, he ignores it and accepts the challenge. Foxy, Hearing this gets me excited and confident. He starts speaking.

"The First challenge is the Donut Race which is a race where three team members from each crew are given construction materials and must use them to build their own boat." He starts walking towards the Ocean, making us follow him.

"Each team then uses their boat to go one lap around the island and the first to reach the finish line wins. easy right?" He turns to us, expecting us to agree with him, but I raise a question.

"where will we even get Materials From?" I raise my eyebrow, and it seems the gorilla found it funny, as he starts laughing.

"Of course we will be the ones who will supply the materials you dummy." He continues laughing, while I continue to give him the raised eyebrow. He stops laughing, seeing me look at him like he is an idiot.

"And what guarantee do I have that the resources which will be provided are usable?...Dummy!" i sarcastically ask him this question, making Foxy laugh-

before covering his mouth while the Monkey looks embarrassed.

"We will use our own resources, as there is no guarantee that you will NOT try to sabotage our Materials." I walk ahead, making the rest of the crew have a smug grin on their face as they follow me. Foxy looks at our back, mumbling to himself.

"He is smart, maybe him?" I can literally hear you dumbass.

We finally reached the shore, and decided on which team would be chosen to go. Luffy wants to participate, but i deny it as there is a possibility that the Ship might sink, and he is not a possibility. Foxy approaches us when we are discussing-

"Since you guys are Newbies, I will give you guys a generous advantage. you guys can use your entire crew to participate instead of only three people. BUT, a team needs three people, so one of you would be All Alon-"

"Oh thank you for butting into our conversation after eavesdropping about it and giving us information that doesn't change anything. you are so Generous!" my sarcasm hits the peak, to the point that even Luffy Winces with the burn that i have inflicted onto Foxy.

Foxy collapses to the ground in despair, while we continue discussing. 

The Crew divides itself into three teams, Team 1 is Nami, Robin and Aisa. This team has Nami as the navigator, Aisa as the enemy detector, and Robin as the Counter. 

Team 2 is Bentham, Luffy and Zoro. Zoro is the mechanic, Luffy is the fighter and Bentham is the navigator. Honestly, this team is built for failure.

Team 3 is Wyper for the Shipwright, Sanji for the Navigation and Usopp for the attacks.

I decided to not participate, and when asked why, I simply said that I need to think about what we need to do AFTER we win. All of them accept it, so I walk to the stalls, buy a straw hat along with a relaxing chair, put it near the race, and sleep, with the straw hat covering my face.

The reason I gave the crew was only half right, as I am sitting to think about Someone we are gonna meet, not about whom to choose after we won the Davy Back Fight. The person whom we are gonna meet next is-

Kuzan, the Admiral who Has Ice Powers. otherwise known as Aokiji. Kuzan is the reason why Robin became Suicidal enough to risk her life and give herself up to CP9. But this time, there is no need for it, since I have given her the will to continue....I hope.

but still, it is better to have contingencies rather than going in blind. While brainstorming, I use my Skill <PARALLEL BRAIN> to monitor the Game with my Observation Haki.

Team 2 Easily goes out of the Game, With Zoro and Luffy being distracted by a stall, while Bentham gets distracted by a group of Dancers.

Team 3 is still in the Game even though Sanji is extremely distracted due to beautiful Women. Wyper and Usopp pick up the slack. 

Team 1 is the perfect team, with Nami's navigation skills, they are easily able to move around the whirlpools. Aisa keeps predicting all the attacks that they will suffer,causing Robin to put an end to it and even Sink a few boats.

eventually, during the last hurdle. Foxy puts his finger in a weird Motion-

*BAM*

and gets slammed into the ground by me, stopping him from Using His devil fruit powers on the team. Everyone surrounding us is shocked, but I just get up and walk back to my seat, sitting like nothing happened.

"...Uhh? Team Women Wins!?" Itomimizu exclaims in surprise and in confusion. The Gorilla looks angry, turning to me with accusations in his tone.

"YOU CHEATER. HOW DARE YOU-"

"Captain Foxy, are you okay?" Gina tries to Lift Foxy up, but he stands up by himself almost instantly. He looks angry, but is calm enough to not throw accusations at me.

"Why did you do that?" I raised my eyebrow at him, like the question he asked was stupid. This look makes him even angrier, but I answer anyway.

"why shouldn't I? I am not a participant of this round similar to you. so, if you do unnecessary things, so can I!" I shrug at him, making him realize that I know what he was trying to do.

"Y-You have no Proof!" At first he shutters, but his confidence comes back. i raise my eyebrows once more, making him realize that-

"What Proof? When did I ever accuse you of something? all i said was that you did something 'Unnecessary', i never said what you did." he tries to answer, but i speak over him.

"I never said that you tried to use your Devil fruit powers, which allow you to slow other people down, to slow my crew mates long enough for your mates to pass them. Did I ever accuse you like that?" I turn my head with a smile, causing Foxy to tremble in horror, understanding that I know exactly what he did.

" I didn't say anything like that. so, you continue doing your Unnecessary things, while I will do more 'unnecessary' things to stop your 'unnecessary' things." With that, I turn around and walk back to my Chair, Sitting on it and waiting for the team to arrive.

The team arrives a little bit later, all in conversation. when they notice me, Luffy rushes to me and explains what is going on.

"So, Who to choose?" Everyone looks at me, and I turn to look at the dejected Foxy Pirates. I try to think of whom to add, since Luffy in the canon did take the flag, which isn't a problem here. but we still have to play the remaining two rounds, so we NEED to pick Someone-

Oh, yeah. I could use 'HIM'.

I get up from my seat, whispering the choice to Luffy, who looks disgusted.

"Really, 'HIM'?" He turns to look at the person, and 'He' stutters, realizing what the decision is gonna be. Luffy looks back at me, and I nod. He turns to others, and while they are not happy about this (Especially Sanji) they all Nod.

"Fine, we have our decisions." All of us come to stand behind Luffy, who stares at Foxy's crew.

"w-well, you DID win after all. so, who are you gonna choose? Gina? She is a Shipwright, something you guys do need. you want Big Pan, he is a Wonton, a Hybrid between Giants and Fishmen. that's-"

"The Crewmate We want is- YOU Foxy!-"

THE END

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YOU KNOW, I AM QUITE EXCITED FOR MOVIE 6, SINCE THAT IS THE MOST INTERESTING MOVIE IMO. SO, WAIT FOR WHEN THAT RELEASES, UNTIL THEN,THANKS FOR READING THIS CHAPTER.


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