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A man dies in a plane crash from a supposed terrorist attack. A mysterious... Devil reincarnates him into a new world and gender bends him into a female.
It looked to be your standard fantasy world at first, but as Arpious traverses farther into her journey, she finds out that she might not be on a planet.
She discovers many secrets that are unknown to her fellow monsters, through the help of her comrades, wives, and even enemies?
She learns that the sky is fake? There are worlds right under her world? How is that even possible?
Spirits instead of gods? Where the heck is she?
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Volume 1.
This volume has a mix of action and kingdom building, plus the grammar isn't that good. I'm going back to the earlier chapters and editing them when I have free time. Also, the pacing is really quick but I'm trying to fix it by adding things that I didn't earlier, such as explaining the number of citizens that are multiplying each day.
Volume 2.
This volume is a segway to the third volume which will be action-packed. It introduces new characters that will be necessary for the third volume.
Most of the chapters will bore some readers since there is minimal action and MC is disabled for half of the volume.
Grammar gets much better halfway through but the beginning still needs some improvement, grammar-wise.
Volume 3.
In progress.
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MC has mood swings occasionally so just be ready for that.
MC is pretty overpowered but that doesn't mean she wins easily all the time.
I'm thinking of making this a pretty long novel so development will be slow.
I'm also using this novel to improve my writing since I'm kind of bad at it. This also explains why my writing is terrible in the beginning and slowly gets better throughout the novel.
Also, the beginning of this story is similar to "Epic of Caterpillar" but it differs later on. It wasn't my intent to copy "Epic of Caterpillar" but I guess parts of the story stuck in my mind but I promise it differs later.
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Novel is mainly inspired by - [Epic of Caterpillar] and [RE: Monster]
The picture I used for the cover. Full credit to the artist -
https://www.pixiv.net/en/artworks/49312139
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I love the story of this novel. Especially I also like Yuri's story. The character development is well made. Also, the MCs don't have a naive side that makes me love this novel. And for the building of his empire, I hope it is not too hasty. I hope his world background is expanded even further.
Ok let me start off by saying tat this novel isn't bad but it's not that good either. The starting is quite good when the mc starts to lvl up and saying that she wants to get as strong as possible until it got to the kingdom building genre the mc stops leveling up at that point the novel got boring and I basically skipped some paragraphs. I think this novel will get better in the future (hopefully). That's all fokes
This book is great its the first yuri harem ive seen that isnt just smut. there is some minor punctuation and spelling errors but nothing major honestly this book deserves more recognition its a bit fast paced but thats fine cant wait to continue reading and see where this novel goes in the future.
TRUTH AUTHOR why did you make the MC of this novel into D girl more better than genderbender female or male..That's why I hate EPIC OF CATERPILLAR that novel is so dumb with a gender bender. the novel is centered male hero but why is THE MC Kureina female always it dumb why not D GIRL . EPIC OF CATERPILLAR IS DUMB NOVEL Kureina is a total marriage sue who those not work hard for anything and she eats the human children because they are useless and for the skill points..kireina is so dumb she did not take science and technology skills SCIENCE IS GOD..why was your novel this FTNR
if you ignore how much time pass it is a good novel but it will become worse as the ch go she become an empire with barely 200 people and in 3 days it will become a city with kids women become pregnant in 1 day and give birth the day after XD XD XD 3 star for a good world background and a passable ch design and writing quality and stab of upp with a trash story dev
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~I put both good and bad in the reviw so scroll down to see both~ Good things~ Okay so ive only reas about 40 chapters so far so take with a grain of salt buti thunk the author has a really good idea and good direction she went with the story as a whole and the development while fast makes sense for the Mc. there are also hardly any gramatical errors and that makes reading this story that much smoother. another thing i loved about the story is the evolution part as EoC was one of my favorite books and i thought it had a great system. Bad things~ Ive only read about 40 chaps in the story but i wanted to say something. In the story you dont explain all of the skills and what they do like the skills she got from the phonix or some of those from the harpys and i just think its bad world building. i can accept that but the kingdom thing when she got back is just terrible i mean they the people there evolved from not even having anything above stone tools to staight up having lamps and a city in like 10 days. Then there is the whole population issue as the coty should only have around 50-100 people when the non combatants were evacuated before the fight but in just like 3 days since that happened there was unprecedented development. it just dosent make sense in my opinion. another criticism i have is that the pacing is just so incredibly break neck that it makes it hard to follow as it took the mc like 20 days to go from being a chicken to killing a phonix and having a kingdom.
A great start and really enjoyable and as it gets later on MC becomes a bit of a wimp, getting dominated by her loved ones including pretty much getting r*ped and forced pregnancy. Ended up dropping it after that, shame they turned a strong character into something lesser.
I have read more than 200 chapters. one thing I found is don't use status for word filler. .. If the annoying same status screen is removed the your book will be half the chapters I think. [stop using status to increase words and it's annoying , also people pay for it so dont waste their money on chapters where half chapter is status some is something from last chapter and just 35% new chapter..
small pet peave just got to around chapter 100 but she checkes her states like 2 times every chapter and instead of shorting it as the author only wants to shoe one thing they show the whole states I Swear I've seen the status about every chapter and by the time I'm done reading I'll probably have memerized every skill in there. this gets about 5 times more annoying when you use the audio setting on here your sitting there for like 3 minutes listening to the status for the 100th time and as it gets longer I Swear I'm going to spend 15 minutes in class just listening to the status.
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the genre is so refreshing and the character is distinct, I cannot wait for their further development ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
There is no hate, only joy For you are beloved by the goddess Hero of the dawn, Healer of worlds Dreams of the morrow hath the shattered soul Pride is lost Wings stripped away, the end is nigh
There is no hate, only joy For you are beloved by the goddess Hero of the dawn, Healer of worlds Dreams of the morrow hath the shattered soul Pride is lost Wings stripped away, the end is nigh
super enjoying the charachter developments is quite good the story is quite slow
I hope that you dont make the same mistake which a novel very similar to this,the epic of butterfly did by involving the family and kids too much into the story where mc gives them her benifits and they leech off mc everywhere.Make the mc explore the world and explore the system
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very very very very good boo....but need more chapter......a loot more.........................................................................
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I like it! Just please keep posting, no drop please.......................................................................................................
Hello I have noticed your novel, I read it and it was pretty fun, it makes me happy that my novel inspired someone to write their own story, keep going, may Kireina-sama bless your writing