/ Fantasy / Arcanum
摘要
Emilia Patel an aspiring young adult with a heart of gold and a fiery temper, as a child like all others her age always wished they had some magical special adventures much like the ones she read in many fantasy novels.
One fateful, she woke up tied up in a chair by an unknown invisible force and a robbed red-haired figure informing her she was to be conscripted to one of the four strongest institutes of Sorcery.
Could this nightmare be a childhood dream come true?
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寫檢討
Amazing Worldbuilding. Nothing to be added to that. Interesting Characters and no unnecessary teenage drama that takes half the book to resolve but nonetheless a young ***** book. There are some seriously strong female characters besides the protagonist. One of the Very few novels here that revolve around power(s), which is not dominated by Male characters. A great story. And it is still at the very beginning. If the character development in both powers and personalities throughout the story will progress steadily and believable this will be one of the best fantasy stories I have read on Webnovel so far.
Reasons put this in your library: Harry Potter-esque. Mistery and magic school. The cast is more mature so you don't have to deal with certain issues. There is one person that is juat an annkying brat. Characters feel like humans. Especially because od the dialog. They are given a good backstory which make sense with their personality. Planar warfare allows for expansive future content. Underlying plotlines with potential tragedy. (personally one of the reasons i can hardly quit since i do hope for a conclusion that either helps the protagonist grow or a happy ending) Chosen one, but not really. There is help and work required and 'plot armor' comes with drawbacks/consequences. I would put most work on the site at a 3.5 on average. So this 5 is meant as a comparison.