摘要
One week. Mingyu gave himself one week to unleash the beast within him. One week of freedom. One week of not caring just enjoying. One week away from home, away from his thick books, away from his thick glasses. One week of partying, drinking, and *cough* *cough* sex, something he has never done in his 23 years of existence.
That one week caused him all these. An eternity of sleepless night, loads of stress, a lack of social life, a bunch of problems, and the spawns of the devil himself.
Yes, spawns. Four spawns to be exact!
"Appa, wake up!"
"Appa, Pipi is hungry."
"Appa, I want to poo."
"Appa, let's play!"
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Hello! This is Claidale, the author. I am just coming back to writing, I am quite rusty so far, but I am giving myself a chance. Please give this book a chance? And I will try my best to bring out a story that will make you laugh, sentimental, and worth your time. Have blessed day. Stay safe everyone.
There is not much for me to go off on since there is only one chapter, however what I see so far is good. The pacing is well and the character design seems to be going in the right direction. There are some grammar mistakes here and there but it's barely noticeable. I hope there will be more of this story. Keep up the good work author.