/ Fantasy / Apocalypse: The Ring of Salor
摘要
A celestial anomaly, the Ring of Salor, emerges in the sky, shattering the moon and taking its place. As the shattered moon forms a ring around Earth, the planet is bathed in a perpetual crimson glow, altering the very fabric of life. Humanity, once the pinnacle of Earth's children, splinters into new hideous twisted, and contorted figures amidst the ruins of their cities. The remaining humans, now a minority, must navigate this brutal new world, contending not just with the new species, but also with the emergence of magic and the continual bombardment of celestial debris.
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Other than the repeating part of the 1st chapter (which I have read), I like the writing quality! I like how you post so frequently, but don't overwhelm yourself if it proves to be a lot. Characters seem alright and nothing out of the norm. I like how you introduce us with something strange, almost alien-like which captivated everyones' attention but most of them lose interest and go back to their work. Seems pretty reasonable, but honestly I'd think the kids sitting by the window would still peak at what's going on, no? Overall, pretty good. Solid 4.0.
One of an awesome book i ever read. The writer has an amazing writing style. I really love it👏🏻🌟 Within the whole story, author had given life to all the characters. Once again, you're a great writer, signed
This is a great book with a well-developed plot. The story is engaging and full of twists and turns, and the author does an excellent job of keeping the reader hooked. I found myself unable to put the book down until I reached the very end. If you're looking for a book that will keep you on the edge of your seat, this is definitely it!
Here's a 5-stars for your first review... Yay!!! Anyway, the plotline you wrote in your synopsis is very unique and original. The concept of Ring of Solar shattering the Moon is quite intense. Also your writing style is very simple and direct. It is something a newbie reader like me prefers. Overall, your novel holds lots of potential. Good luck with WPC.
Good luck signed. The journey of an author is always a tough one, but may the gods be ever in your favor with this novel! Your writing is great