/ Fantasy / Another World Chronicles
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Hiro Sakaki, a high school student, died and was reborn. Allen McCarthy went through a similar experience. Yumi Hitomachi and Rina Shirasaki, meanwhile, were subjected to Summoned Magic by the Gods. The four of them have come together to experience the life of the next world and to investigate the otherworld. Will the four of them be able to lift the veil of mystery? Furthermore, the enemy he faced was not just the people around him. Even more powerful than ordinary humans.
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The story is good except for the fact that some characters feel really shallow. Spoiler alert* . . . For example - Allen Mccarthy is a killer that kills for money(he is a mercenary) but he shows no remorse in doing what he does. His character design is quite illogical. The best example of mercenary-type character would be kiritsugu emiya from Fate zero. His character development was pretty tragic and his mental growth was something that happens to someone who has been killing their entire life. Allen Mccarthy perhaps could be a battle maniac who kills for fun....... If so he behaves a little like someone who cares for other. . . . If you agree with me just fix this character a little bit.... Though I haven't read past the first 7 chapters. Hopefully his character development would be fun and logical. Though I liked Hiro sasaki.... He has a good character background that makes a little sense and his carefree personality is a little bit consistent.
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Latar belakang Jepang belakangan sangat digemari, dan penulis menuliskan karakternya dengan sangat jelas, penggambaram alur ceritanya pun tidak terlalu rumit dan nyaman untuk disimak ❤️
Ceritanya bagus, penulisannya rapi. Jadi semangat bacanya. Suka pokoknya sama cerita ini wajib masuk collection ini. Ditunggu kelanjutannya ya
Hiro Sakaki karekteristik nya keren, suka banget sama ceritanya dan alurnya.... Aku selalu suka cerita fantasi pokonya langsung masuk rak....
How crazy can there be a story like this. The plot doesn't get boring anymore, the author should update it quickly. Do not be long!! spirit!!!
ceritanya bagus banget, menegangkan 💖💖💖💖💖💖 auto masuk ke rak dan recommend buat para pembaca yang suka genre iniii🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰
wooow... this is great story', for charecter, storyline, and setting ia sooo amazing. when i read read first chapter i think i cant stop with it. [img=recommend]
good Story....I Like it...Auto masuk Rak ini..Lanjutkan Thor...Semangat❤❤❤❤❤❤❤⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
I love this story. But the you keep switching genders and sometimes the sentences don’t make any sense. Maybe it improves later on as I read more but for now it needs some work
Going to another world and be a hero there, I wish that place really existed. I want to be hero too ... he he he... xD. I love how the author brings reader into the fantasy world in this story and how describes the atmosphere there.
I really like every time the author conveys the main character's point of view, not exaggerating like the main character in an over power story. Starting from Zero to being as strong as now, it's really amazing
Hiro Sakaki tokoh yg keren, penulisan yang jelas dari alur. Tidak banyak buang-buang waktu. Penempatan dialog tag yang sudah tepat, dan mudah dipahami kaliamatnya tak berbelit-belit dan tak tergesa-gesa.
fantasi lagi, keren bisa lancar begini nulisnya. dapat dari mana ya ide begini .di tunggu karya selain fantasi. hehehe kepo juga dengan genre yang lain .soalnya Fantasi jadi bikin otak kemana-mana nih hari ini
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i thinksthis story very great, so i waiting next chapters. grazy up brothers. 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗😍😍😍 i save at my favorite reading.🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗