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摘要
System
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OP mc
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no harem
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low key
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English is my third Language so there might be some grammatical mistakes. I am sorry for the inconvenience.
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I was suddenly reborn in a strange Magical World. As the eldest son of the Helstea Family. He did not even know who was the protagonist of this world or if was he a third-rate villain or just an existence who was not supposed to exist at all.
My Other Novels and Fan Fictions
● Lethargic Legacy
(dropped)
● Reborn In Martial Peak With A Dao System
(Complete)
● In Complete Martial Arts Attributes
● Reborn in Tower of god as a Mazino (volume 1 Complete)
Give a Quick look at my Patreon
https://patreon.com/DaoistOeHtln
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3評論
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
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寫檢討
hey author here, I have not read the novel so if you have any spoilers please share them here or on my patreon. thankyou
The novel is going really well. The fiction and the story are really well planned so far. I have only one request. It would be better if you write better which core of the circles the main character falls into.
Well it's genuinely new concept and I am looking forward to more but i think story also need to be oriented towards mc rather than Arthur seriously he is having to much pov of him and I am hoping one day when he shows his power looking forward to how others would react as he is going to breaking their logic and question themselves HOW? And i am looking forward to his future and dude kinda need someone love's him by the way is there romance and who is the pretty girl as his own kinda like you know loose hope of him or something in this lines well overall it's good