摘要
Allyn is almost always by himself, playing video games or watching movies and anime alike.
...Apparently, he loves fantasy worlds filled with Apocalyptic events. A world where you can be whatever you choose.
His dreams were granted when a new addictive Virtual Reality game got released for a limited time and die-hard gamers fell in love with it almost instantly. Allyn is among the few fortunate ones who got their hands on it right on time.
At long last, he'll get to experience his fantasies...
However, what will you do when all of a sudden, the game system got hacked and you are unable to log out? When you're stuck in an artificial reality where death is not an option, cause that will lead to you dying in the real world?
To escape this mental trap, the ultimate game quest is to assassinate the most powerful Titan in all history, the one who is known as Lord of all Titan.
Allyn's ultimate goal is to make it back to his world no matter what it takes.
However, the longer he's stuck here, the more he forgets he has a real-world to return to.
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My novel isn't exactly what I would call great since this is my first time writing a novel that is centered on video games, but it gets better the further you go. Maybe around its 20th chapter or earlier... you'll be the judge of that.
The cover page is not mine... please, don't get pissed if this belongs to you.
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From what i've read (chapter 9 50%) The general writing and story is quite decent but lacks a few components to really enjoy the novel. That being the fantasy part. It lacks core systems that Are logical and easy to understand such AS instead of might use strength or spirit damage to magic damage also in the world you have set up i see it hard for the character to find trials where they Get stronger, more information Lore, character development. I see they have quest via the system so this might change but Even then it would lack some small components I think if you add magical realism with a good magic or aura system it would make the story more enjoyable for the reader.
I have not read much yet so take this at face Value. I enjoy the few characters and their personalities that we have been introduced to so far. I also enjoy the plot, although it is not very unique i like where it is going. the only problem i have is that the writing can sound kind of weird like some things been written in present tense when it should have been written in past tense, but it does not bother me much. over all i recommend it 👍