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摘要
Random handyman guy dies, he talks with a god and goes to Runeterra with power from some Spiderman
Look what will he do there
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I do not own Arcane or Spider-man, credit to the respective owners, I just own my OC
The image on the book is made an AI: with https://hotpot.ai/art-generator/
Have fun
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3.85
- 寫作品質
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I can't stand this, I just don't like the way the characters are and their interactions. They seem to me to be very forced and unnatural actions for the context surrounding the time and place. Writing Quality (3★), Stability of Updates (4★), Story Development (2★), Character Design (2★), World Background (3★).
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A very good story, it has its problems but there is always something to improve, it's always worth listening to the opinions and ideas of others, but don't let them destroy what you want to create.
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There haven't been tons of chapters so there isn't enough to properly review but at the minute it's looking promising and I think if the author doesn't drop it and continues with the direction he is going in it could be quite a good novel. The MC is a bit childish which I think makes sense and doesn't act like a murder hobo trying to kill everyone and everything for the slightest inconvenience which is great.
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Mc is cringe asf. If you can get by that then it's a mid story.