/ Book&Literature / Alive bond
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(Because this is my first story it would make me really happy,not to mention it would be useful to test the popularity, if you were to add it to your collection if you enjoy it)
Humans have always had the privilege of building and protecting their bonds themselves. Well,they haven't done a very good job so far. So when ancient darkness wants to destroy the human race God must do what he can to protect humanity. Even if it means taking that privilege away from humans...sort of and giving it to someone else.
Angelica is the first bond to be made human. And she is being hunted down by the Shadows as food. She is young,inexperienced and alone with her two sources. What can she do?
But everything changes when the younger Prince of Shadows dies. Now with the Shadows preoccupied with their Prince's reincarnation,will Angelica exploit this unique opportunity to prepare herself for the battle that could determine the future of human kind? Will she gain new allies along the way? And who in the end will be her real enemy?
I will be posting this story on Royal Road
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Grammar is good. The story also had a Nice iNtoduction making readers curious About the character. you may try to dEscribe the Facial characteristics of the Main lead though. Anyways, hope to see more of your work! So far so good 😊
this story has a wonderful start it actually very interesting i would recommend this book to anyone you should try to read it if you are a old or new reader.
It's a very interesting story that has a good polished character, the plot is planned well and makes the readers understand. I like the plot and the best thing is the author's writing skill. Keep up the good work. We are all waiting for new chapters. Good work and I am always cheering you! well done!
This is a fantastic story. If you've read the cover, don't expect anything less about the development of bonds. I can't say much without spoiling, but following the story of the protagonist, this aspect of bonds is given a new light by the author. The expression used in the first chapters with the angels etc gives you food for thought about the things we take for granted, like birthdays and personal relationships. Drama intensifies as you go deeper into the story in ways that you don't expect. This story deserves traction and I believe it will only continue to get better. Rock on!
Wow, this book is a real drug! Initially i just came for a review but gahdamn! Its really addicting. Your world-building is really one of a kind. i can see how much thought you put in your book. I do spot some english error here and there but who doesnt make mistakes? I really hope you continue writing on like this, author! Ill look forward for more works!
Wow! 😯 This is new to me but I must say, the idea of this novel is very unique❤. I thought it would be like Greek God and Goddesses but, it was not 💕. It was a wholesome idea of using Angels and Demons that we see read in bibles 🌹. You can feel the emotions of the characters as well. I like this novel. I just hope for more chapters. ❤
I'm not gonna lie, but this book is really a good read. But the problem is that it's lacking a huge amount of details. I don't know if it's only me but that's what I felt. Some parts are also hard and confusing to other readers. I advise the author to make the book more 'alive'. Put details and show the characters uniqueness! Overall, I really like it!
This story has an amazing plot, I continued to read the chapters until the last one, the are some grammatically errors but they soon disappeared for the story as the chapter continued. What a nice work.
The plot is unique and truly a breath of fresh air. The characters are very well written and have depth. Hope you keep on writing, this truly is an interesting novel. :)
I'm at work so I don't have time to read more than one chapter yet, but I'm putting in my library for later! From what I've seen so far this is about to be one of my favs! The grammar is excellent, which is so refreshing! And it's a different approach to things than everyone else has taken! I'm ready to be off work so I can really dig in!
So far so good. An angel and a demon? That's a new one for me and it's a very interesting read. So intriguing you would want to keep turning the page. Good writing quality and character design. I can't wait to find out about the connection between the two. Good job author👍🏾
The grammar is good. Love the introduction, the transition between scenes are also commendable, the novel's pace is not too fast or slow for the specific type of novel. Characters are well thought of and the plot is also on par with the best ones out there.
This story is interesting, with a good plot and a lot of attention to character dynamics. The world is interesting and detailed too. The writing quality suffers a bit as there are some minor grammatical and flow errors, but they aren't too bad.
It's amazing. I love the attention to detail, your plot is intriguing, great descriptions. Over all its just a wonderful story and I can't wait to read more!
This story has such a unique storyline I love the concept. Its obvious that the author has put in alot of work and thought in his plot and characters. I cant wait to read more.
honestly. the synopsis drew me in and the content did not disappoint. I am still going Wow! beautiful is the best way to describe this book. just frixkijg Beautiful
Everything is well portrayed but some grammatical mistakes.. Good luck to author..looking forward to more chapters..... Work hard..fighting..
Bonjour, Quite an intresting start for a story I say, I haven't notice any grammatical typos(unless I miss them). the story development is indeed good I say. quite amazing really.
Angelica comes on earth to save human bonds . The gods were worried because the humans they created were destroying themselves with their greed and lack of love. let's join angelica's journey🧡
This is an interesting book honestly. I have read the first few chapters and was quite intrigued by the plot. It's certainly a good plot and it's also very unique too. Keep up the amazing work.