/ Fantasy / Alice Lost in Nightmares
摘要
In a land of blood and rust, a girl with no memory of her past awakens to horrible nightmares beyond her imagination that only she can see.
Whimsical creatures straight out of a twisted fairy tale relentlessly stalk her, each calling the name 'Alice'.
With no idea of what is transpiring, the young girl must battle to survive.
In a world with no hope, the girl must struggle in a nightmare that she may never wake from.
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Hello! Thanks for checking out my novel! This story will be a dark and twisted take on Alice in Wonderland. I hope to make this story about how a innocent girl gains the strength to survive in a twisted world filled with death and nightmares. How will she come out in the end of it all?
My Goal is around 5 chapters a day or so. Maybe more if i can but we shall see. Till Then enjoy! :)
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Story has a lot of good elements here and there that set it apart from the average dark fairy tale retelling you generally get with these type of 'edgy' re imaginings. Good start so far besides maybe a few pacing issues early on that kinda made the action hard to read. but otherwise enjoyable as a whole so far!
Interesting Take on Alice in Wonderland. Read the first 15 chapters and im pretty interested so far and cant wait to see where the story will take go in the future. Keep up the good work!!!
Usually I am not a huge fan of this type of story but I am enjoying it nonetheless. The World is interesting and the Action is exciting so far. Love the twisted yet familiar characters popping up here and there
A book with a great idea, just needs some more touch ups perhaps and we'll have ourselves a great book, keep it up author can't wait to see where this journey leads us.
Great read really good world building and characters. The premise is interesting even if I don't understand whats happening so far. Is she a clone? What is the 'something' that killed the Hatter? Cant wait for more!
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Surprisingly a good read so far. There are times when it feels like the story may be moving a little too fast, but all in all, its been pretty enjoyable when it does get going.
Hello DetectiveJones here with a Shameless Review! I Hope you all enjoy reading this as I enjoy writing it. This story is obviously a darker take on Alice in Wonderland. With that being said, there is a deeper element at play here and all may not be as it seems on the surface. Alice may take a little to get her bearings as a character but she wll slowly come into her own and figure out the origins of herself and the Nightmare that haunts her.