/ Fantasy / Alice, Angel Of Mercy
摘要
Meet John an everyday teen that went from having a normal life to being paralyzed and an orphan.
Now, without much hope left, he decides to risk it all to test the first deep dive system ever created. Accepting all the risks of plugging your brain into a computer just to walk and be normal again he gave his ok.
Now Locked into a world he can't escape from (in a girl character he made) John now called Alice, is left to figure out what is going on and why this world and its people are so real if it is simply a computer game.
In a world where everything is not as it seems will he be able to survive, love or even find a pair of pants?
The picture is from a Pin by Blanca Bernace and is not mine I just really like her work.
I work a ton of hours so updates will be sporadic. I am not doing this for cash so no donations will be requested or needed.
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Repost:: I am still reading but I think this book is wonderfully wrote. And the author put a great amount of time and detail into this and it shows! .
Great book! A must read!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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This is one of the best books I have read on this App. The author actually takes time and makes a good and compelling story. The story of reincarnation people use on this app is Inept and unsatisfying. The way you write fixed that problem for me. I also like how there is very little grammer mistakes. Probably less than if I, a native english speaker, had wrote it. Overall I would say that at the time I wrote this, it is one of if not my favorite book on here.
I'm starting to addicted to reread over and over I say author outdone them self [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
It's a story about a transmigrated male becoming a female angel. It's realistic, believable, and refreshingly lacking of chauvinism. I find it funny and interesting and engaging. My biggest gripe is just inconsistency of updates, but the author was, and is, very upright and forthcoming about it, so I can deal with that.
[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] I really enjoyed this story, and I must say that you are a very good writer. I was on the edge of my seat most of the time and I can't say that about most of the stories on this platform.
If you're reading this review and haven't read the book yet, read the book. ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
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This story is underrated. I’ve power read this novel over the course of the last three days and I can safely say this is one of the better stories on this site. The world building at the start is really good, but that tappers off some once the MC settles into school but its started back up some in recent chapters. The only weak spot I’ve seen in this story so far is characterization, the MC obviously gets the most screentime but so far they don’t seem to have too many flaws. At one point they got arrogant and was caught braking the rules but we never really saw any characteristics that pointed to that behavior before or since, maybe I just missed them though. The side character have almost no development or screen time outside of brief mentions and a few scenes where they help the MC on occasion. Dispite these flaws thought I still find myself enjoying this story, the world has got a decent foundation and their’s plenty of political mystery left in the plot. I would highly recommend this book.
Just found the book. like the story , read until 41. The lead is likable, isn't getting crazy about a guy or girl stupidly. Emotional maturity seems ok of this lead. The main issue is the updates! I did not realize the author only publish one chapter a month before I started!!!
I find this book to be well written with a good mix of humor and action. Keep up the good work! [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Just finished chapter 2, and I have to say that the storytelling is really good. I did feel some issues with immersing myself into the story as there is a lack of punctuation, but it looks very promising!
AN interesting story but you should add to the world a little. It's a little bland at the moment but it is only chapter 6 so you have time
Really creative story line! I enjoy the humanity that comes out in the main character when he...well..i guess she...is speaking and telling the story from her point of view. I even giggled at a few spots, which to me, speaks mountains about how relatable the character and their emotions are. I also enjoy the cliffhangers or sneak peaks of, what I assume are upcoming characters or events, that are found near the end of some of the chapters. Very intrigued to find out where this goes!