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Part of a Multiverse with Phantasia: The Princess Knight and Full Dive: Eternal Phantasy
A little girl rises amidst the bloodshed world of cultivation.
A vow to the heavens that controls her life or death.
A heartfelt love that lasted for ninety-nine lifetimes.
Ah Chun, a little girl who lost her mother meets an immortal cultivator named Mei Liling. Mei Liling takes Ah Chun on as a disciple and teaches her about cultivation. After making a vow to the heavens, Ah Chun's path in the world of cultivation was set. She now has no choice but to become the strongest or give her life to the heavens and die. A long journey is ahead as Ah Chun grows from a girl who knows nothing into a legend that the storytellers will talk about for years to come.
"Mr. Li, what is the meaning of this? Your daughter has my birth mother's bracelet. "
"So what if I took it! A beggar like you should have died off months ago. You were lucky that we didn't sell you to a slave trader to become some plaything for the highest bidder! You and that slut mother of yours did nothing for this village! You should have died along with her!"
"Mother is it ok to kill someone like this trash over there?"
"Chun'er if you let him live and just beat him, he will most likely try to get revenge, so it's better to remove him from this world altogether."
"Un! Chun'er understands and has learned Mother's lesson well. Chun'er will now rid this world of trash who do not know right from wrong!"
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This has one of my favorite characters on webnovel. Ah Chun is such an interesting combination of adorable cuteness and murderous destruction. The plot twists are great, the world building is excellent, the character interactions walk a fine line between honoring the caricatures most cultivation novels have and realistic people. To cover the two categories I couldn't in good faith give five stars... The writing quality beats out a large majority of novels here, though a bit more editing would catch the three or four minor errors in each chapter. Not enough to detract from the reading, but often enough to lose a star. The other issue is the release rate, technically I should probably give a full five stars because Mr. Invayne does post the promised amount weekly, but there isn't a set schedule to it. Also, Mr. Invayne is working on four novels actively and divides his time based on popularity, and my poor, sweet, adorable, loli just isn't as popular as his others. So read this novel and vote for it so I get more chapters a week!
I immediately fell in love with this book and the MC in the first chapter. Reading how Ah Chun was starving and the author's amazing depiction of that, the bullying, and even the meat the fat boy's sister gave to her was touching and so well done. Even I got a little teary-eyed from this. I kinda came from a similar background - where my brothers, sisters, and I were malnourished to the point where we were about to starve to death, so I felt like I could relate so much to Ah Chun. This is definitely going into my library. Thank you invayne
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I had to stop reading shortly after the 99 samsara thing. Because it was just that bad. We got nearly seventy chapters of an adorable little girl doing adorable little girl things while being somewhat OP and slowly growing up and getting into trouble, and suddenly, BAM! No character development, in one chapter the MC I came to love was gone and in her place was generic cold badass female lead #19274. Also, have a romance that completely bypasses all the troubles it should reasonably have and came out of f-in nowhere really for all that she had a stalker. I came here for cute kid cultivating to immortality, not cold badass in kid body cultivating to immortality with a side of genderflipped wife husbandry. Beyond that, the worldbuilding is nice, I can't fault your writing speed and your writing quality is pretty good, especially for this site. But that 99-lives bull****, man. Why. Y u do dis to adorablest Chun'er.
This is really good i hope the author keeps at it. I do not usually write reviews but so far i am really enjoying this novel enough to take the time to write this review. This is a different take on the average cultivator story and if you are like me and enjoy cultivator stories then this is one to check out. Just the intro of this got me hooked with Ah Chun's character introduction. Really good job Author all my power stones which are not many will go to help support your novel! So keep with it!
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I’ll start off with the PROS. First off, I just want to mention that this is a CULTIVATION novel with NO REINCARNATION! Crazy right? Actually this can debatable, she wasn’t born with knowledge of her previous lives. Practically all novels with female leads that involves a cultivation based world has reincarnated. This is the only one I found that differs, I can be wrong about the only one though as I haven’t checked out every since one. Bravo! Secondly, this story started off so amazingly, it could be one of the best. Tugged my heartstrings and completely pulled me in. Thirdly, I liked how the female lead is stronger than the male lead, very atypical but I like it. Now the CONS. The synopsis is MISLEADING. When I read the synopsis, I really thought this story would diverge from the normal cultivation novel. And it did for a very short period of time. She goes into this array formation and lives 99 lives and come out and wa-la! She’s now the typical badass smartass, cold, domineering female lead we’re all used too. I really liked her personality as a cute little lolli so that was very disappointing. Secondly, this is debatable but I personally don’t like this. After she lives her 99 lives and realizes her one true love who is always beside her, the romance and the acceptance just skyrockets. No conflicts. No drama. No nothing. Completely smooth sailing. There was no development. One second they hate each other then next second they’re planning their marriage. Not my style at all. But some may like it so it’s up to your preference. Lastly, although I did really like the novel it was sort of a let down for me. I really expected it to diverge completely but I still like cultivation novels so I’ll still go on. If you’re planning to read this, as long as you like reincarnation then it’s fine.
Consistent updates, solid plot, OP FL. All qualities I look for in a novel 😂 great job! Love the content thus far.
Hello good, I never write reviews but on this occasion I will make an exception since the story you are writing and developing is something that caught my attention since I read the description, this novel is not like others that I have read that receive a inheritance and now, you have to get into all the problems you find, but get a great immortal cultivator as a mother after losing her own. If there is someone reading this review, I suggest you read it because you will not waste your time invested, thank you very much for your hard work and I hope you do not leave it. **: I would like to know if it is possible to characterize them of the cultivation levels that you have developed for this novel, if you think it is a spoiler and you prefer that it be discovered little by little while you build the novel it is also fine.
This story started out pretty good, however, the mc is basically switched for a different one at the 99 lives samsara thing, and even worse once ah chun goes back to help the immortal that gives her the dreamscape ability, she basically restarts from nothing with a different body. And with none of the bloodlines or understandings she had in her 'past life'. Honestly, you might as well just start reading from that point on as it will save you the frustration of literally everything Ah Chun has worked for disappearing. And I can understand her cultivation disappearing, but for her bloodline, her Dao's (which are supposed to just be understanding, and she didn't lose any memory's) and both her cultivation and her cultivation technique, and her spiritual roots. It might as well be an entirely different novel from that point on, with mc's that have the same name and personality. Though the story up to that point is great.
In my opinion this novel is in dire need of rewrite. First and foremost SAMSARA TWIST IS BAD IN ITSELF AND IS DONE BADLY TOO. Author literally swaps protagonist with different person and on top of that forces her into love out of the blue. Moreover it's like only thing she took out of 99 different lives thousands of years each is her love for male lead and change of personality and nothing useful at all. Second thing is that after that story suddenly becomes sweet cancer inducing shojo. And that is where I am at now. I may sound a bit angry and I am, because start looked really nice and world seemed to be deep enough, although plot is forced to happen quite boldly and characters don't have any depth in the yet. And last bit is nitpicking: the boundaries of mc's talent fluctuate significantly for the story's sake.
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First off, I hesitate to write reviews for two reasons. The first is they usually get deleted, and the second is I know how much a review can impact an aspiring author. However. I feel the need to review this book. I have given myself some time to cool off so my review is more objective. To start, what you did right. The way the main character acts as a young child and amazing powers was well done. She throws tantrums for no reason, is easily influenced by her mother, and gets pouty. Her anger issues result in what a normal toddler would do, such as hitting someone, it just is more deadly. The swiftness with which the story progresses is nice. Usually wuxias take forever and a day to get anywhere. This book has a good pace. Finally, there is little to no grammar errors in this book. It is either well edited or you have great English. Now what I think you did wrong The "sudden change" in ah chun's behavior, while you had a good reason for it, was poorly executed. Yes, she needed to grow up and change her attitude, and 99 lives would do it. However, this was a prime example of telling and not showing. You told us what she experienced, but it was so fast and sudden that it feels more like you rewrote the character to fit the tone and need of the story, rather than having her grow into it. Character development is an important part of a novel, and I don't think it was done well here. Second, the way she falls for the male lead. Frankly,, it was bad. Yes, 99 lives is a good excuse, but again, telling not showing. It feels more like a forced romance than something that was built up over the time you said it was (99 lives). Furthermore, having it happen so fast removes the point of the "is t love" chapters, and the point of that little girl at all. Removing her from the story would change literally nothing. For someone you placed such emphasis on early, she ended up being nothing but a filler character. I don't have a problem with her loving Shen, the issue is how "fast" it happened. OverallC I blame this on what I believe to be your want to write a romance novel overriding your patience in setting it up. Also, the dialogue between female lead and male lead is...not well executed, multiple long paragraphs about them gushing how they will be forever together and never betray each other is not even remotely close to how lovers talk in real life (at least in my experience). I found myself skipping paragraphs because it was awkward to read and really had no impact on the story. Overall, a great story was messed up by a portly executed good idea (samsara). My advice is try to take time to develop the characters and not simply change them to fit your will. While your characters are your creation, inside the story they are their own people, and need to grow like a real person would.
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I LOVEE this NOVEL!!!!!!!!!!! My utmost favourite!!! Usually, the updates are really nice. But recently they have decreased by A LOT!! I hope the author is alright!! Since a lot of people are probably SUPER stressed over quarantine and covid-19. Please update when you are ready!!! (also can you specify usually how many updates per week your gonna have?!) There is a lot of people here waiting for you!!!!
i suggest that you guys dont read it your going to get disappointed bc she gets a total personality change at chapter 90. ? M .. . . . . . . . . .. .
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It is a good story!! and it is daily updated! And strong female lead,not usual type of cliche romantic story. I mean it a romantic with overpowered female xd. Its worthy to read.
Ich muss ehrlich sagen das ich den Hut ziehen vor den drei Geschichten die in eine Geschichte führt. Ah Chun: Aufstieg in den Himmel, Full Dive: Ewige Phantasie und Phantasia: Der Prinzessin Knight sind als Einzel Geschichten schon sau gut doch wenn man den waren Welt Hintergrund sieht man was für eine Arbeit dahinter steckt. Ich hoffe auf weitere Kapital um zu sehen wie es weiter geht. Danke an den Autor für die Geschichten.
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While on the surface this story appears to be about a cute FL trying to stand up for herself, at closer scrutiny this is the story of a young girl from a poor background gaining power and her (rapid) corruption from said power. If you actually read what she is doing, the conclusion is that she does more bodily-, psychological-, financially- and administrative harm to bystanders than any of her adversaries. Well under 50 chapter inn and she is already actively using comparable methods to the bully that first sent her on her blood filled quest, and several others. For example is extortion by explicit or implisitt threat of harm becomes one of many commonly used methods to achieve her goals. Truly a novel that should have the "villainous lead" tag. Although some of the blame comes from the standard "dog eat dog" type society standard for the genre, much of the blame comes from an influencial mother figure. The mother figure seems to be so used to subordination in her sphere of influence, that she has zero tolerance for insubordination even outside her sphere of influence. This manifests among other things in forcing unrelated people to fix and/or pay for mistakes she or hers are responsible for under implisitt threat of harm/death. All in all a reasonable entertaining novel. A "poor origin protagonist cultivation" novel with all the expected tropes, although with enough variation to not be completely swallowed by the 'ocean of samey cultivation stories'. Worth trying, even if you are reasonably overfed from this genre
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I really like the writing and also how well the story is going forward The romance is pretty well done and while I don't like having the mc rely on ml like has happened it is a rarity. If there's something which I personally would've liked to change with this story is that although dao comes in there's no real in depth into it and it comes in late in the story and not explained very well at all I'd like to see dao used properly like her space dao is basically non existent even if it's lvl 2 and only her sword dao is consistently used
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I love the story so far❗♥️ I am so hooked right from the start😝 it really is a fun and entertaining read all the way❗❗❗👍 thx for uploading the story here😇 please more soon😳
Hello, all I am the author of this novel. I just want to say this is probably one of the most favorite novels I have ever had the pleasure to write and read and I have read a lot of novels. Of course, this is just my personal opinion. I just really enjoy writing about Ah Chun and her trip through her path of cultivation. The trials and tribulations that she will have to go through are well worth everyone's reading time. So for all my fans out there thanks a lot for reading this novel and experiencing the story of Ah Chun with me!
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