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摘要
in the mushroom war. a not very handsome grown man was among the rubble. looking at the giant green mushroom in the distance.
[player system activated]
Will it move into an apocalyptic world?
[translated by Google]
標籤
-- 推薦票
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9評論
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
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寫檢討
Straight up reading the original and translating each word by yourself gets you a better translation
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No está mal la historia pero parece que le falta mucho espíritu para que la obra tenga más unión con el público y no es por ser grosero pero parece que se apresuró demasiado a mejorar y checar al personaje pero es bueno no increíble pero bueno
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I liked the story, despite some inconsistencies, really interesting, I wish you had informed that it is a multiversal journey, I'm not a big fan of this type of travel story but I can swallow it, I hope it doesn't take too long to get back to adventure time.