/ Fantasy / Adam's Inconspicuous Life
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Adam Soileward. A five year old child who could talk with God somehow brought the world to the beginning of its end.
AN: This is my first novel as a new writer. If you don't like it, please give a review and I will work to be better. Thank you and have a nice day.
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Up to this point (ch 38) the book is very enjoyable and also well paced. The concept I found really interesting since it's the first time I've read a sci-fi biblical parody type novel, and it's entertaining seeing the chaotic mess of a relationship between Weyah, Adam, and Eve. The worldbuilding and magic system bits are mostly told through small sections of exposition but the story moves along fast enough that you don't notice it too much. I did find the characters to be overall quite likeable+believable; they all have their own traits that can move the story forward and it isn't solely dependent on the mc which makes the world feel all the more immersive and interesting. One thing though, the transitions for the switching of character perspectives are sometimes in the middle of a chapter rather than at the beginning which I did get used to however I can see it being a tad confusing for some. Don't really have much else to say cuz words are hard but I'd recommend reading this novel.
this book is really good!!! i encourage everyone to read this!!! the writing quality is superb!!! i have a very good feeling about the story development!!! AND THE CHARACTER DESIIIIIGNN IS VERY INTERESTING!!!!
This is a GEM that is yet to be widely discovereeeed!!! IM LOVING THE PLOT AND CHARACTERS... the story is also FUN and can surely MAKE YOU LAUGH😍😂
Dope dope dope Great read I recommend it It won't let you down Five stars Boo yaa ....................................................
Too early to say much but the start is interesting, the writing is good. I didn't spot any big grammar mistakes, the flow of the writing was good too. I will be waiting for more chapters before binging it and then updating this review. Keep up the good work Author
This is just right up in my alley. A perfect 5 for my taste😍😍😍 ANNNNND I really recommend this story to you readeeeeers😄😄😄 BIG THUMBS UP❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
the story is UNIQUE and GOOD...................................................................................................................
This is the author and I am here to tell you a few things. This story needs a lot of details due to the need of describing creatures that are not common in fantasy stories. The first few chapters are all about making an environment that is different from the standard fantasy genre because I wanted a unique story. I can't say much about my writing because I am the writer though. If you find any mistakes, please do point out. I need constructive criticism. And beyond that, I am just going to hope you enjoyed or will enjoy my book. Have a good day.