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摘要
From a child to an adult Drake has always given what he earned to others that lacked them.In his final moments of life while saving a little girl all he thought was
' I wish my next life would be like those MCs in novels having a system and fighting strong opponents '
As he thought of this the space around him shook and a slight crack was formed.From his body a speck of light flowed into the crack.
Here starts the adventure of a man hardened by life and longing for adventure.
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The story started with one of the best premise ever but then the MC became one of the most hypocritical person ever and the dumbest MC you can see (all while being reincarnated with 360 intelligence and 325 wisdom) which doesn't make any sense. That's not the worst. The main problem is that the author doesn't interact with the readers. He'll see the questions and reviews but just answer the ones who benefit him or say "you'll see later" and expect us to just forget about the problem in the story. Even if you're gonna tell us to scram because it's your story and you do what you want at least say it so we can leave instead of making us expect a change which isn't going to happen.
Heto complex mc 😑, spending all his points on people he doesn't know but not his parents and you call him a genius 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂
This garbage is included in the popular list?! What's with this world? Are you guys dumb or what? This is really ridiculous! Even 2 stars aren't worth it! BLEH! Garbage... Yes! This is suitable to describe this sh*t! The quality of your writing is bad enough to kill me if I keep reading it. Wasting karma points for strangers, you haven't even been born but you just give them many things! And are you even sure you will born in Konoha? And what did you give to your parents? NOTHING! You're not a good person, just an idiot. *WARNING Don't waste your time here
I'm I'm complete agreement for in hungry for chapters, except he doesnt mention how messy the writing looks. Its not grammar but your eyes will slowly die while reading it.
Ranghess is being fucking shameless spamming 5 stars for over and over. This story is trash with a capital T. It’s utter garbage okay? The story is all over the place with **** tons of flaws in the plot and the time skip happens really often as well. If you are reading this, rate a 1 Star and leave because the 5 stars on the rating is a sham
Is the Gay MC tag joke? i didnt finish reading yet he already getting the second wife >.< i feel cheated >.< ____________________________________________________________________________________
Pretty disappointed with how the novel turned out especially so early on in the novel. Most of the problems i had is already addressed by the top negative reviewer. TLDR - Dumb af MC - MC personality doesn't match after reincarnating (feels like a whole new character) - Plotholes
Spent 15 days in the womb, goes unconscious for 8 months and 15 days (at this point he should only have a day at most before it hits 9 months) still has to spend 50 more days in the womb. So according to the author it takes around 10 3/4ish months to be born, can't even get something so ****** right.
Wtf with this fan-fic spammed his own novel 5 star review with alt account have some shame bro! This is the most shameless author that I ever seen!
Writing quality's pretty bad, makes it a real chore to read. There's a lot of things that happen that make no sense for the mc to do, and the way it's written makes it even harder to understand.
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I am gonna be shameless and give it a 5 star. this is my first time writing so if you guys find any kind of problems point it out. Basically this is a story about a person who wishes for excitement in his life.watch as he goes through battles and with his each step his enemies tremble.
Before writing reviews read at least 12 chapters because when you read 7 chapters and think you understand the novel you are wrong! Because of people like these, many authors have been discouraged to write and then some original novels that were like Against the God's and Emperor Domination ended an example is All Existence
Wow, man honestly, i wasn't expecting much after reading some bad reviews but your novel is a pleasant surprise.. I like the way your mc cares about the original cast, even those characters who were neglected in the manga. It's good to see a novel which isn't completely centered on the mc's improvement, but also takes some time for the other characters' building and for the story. And you deserve praise for maintaining and even improving the quality of your writing. I have read too many novels, especially fan-fics, which had a pretty good start but then became plain and uninteresting, and where the grammar kept degrading. So keep up the good work !
Hello Author, I have been decided that I will be your greatest fan. Don't mind other's review. This story is awesome and unlike others novelI the MC didn't change the plot, which I love the most. I also like the characters and their way of showing emotion, just like in anime. I hope that you will not drop this story like what others do to their story. What a waste of potential masterpiece. I am a little bit excited about his journey to other worlds or divine worlds it there is. I support you author, please keep writing
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There is no need to read it I already knew that this fanfic is a ****. Which other novel in this site that need 5* spam to increase its poor rating? NONE ONLY THIS ONE
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Good writing ! His choices at the beginning were a bit surprising but it actually turned out pretty well and made the story much more interesting.
5 stars for update 1 star for everything else. Seriously, I have no idea why this book is ranked highly. It is LITERAL garbage, I know that I have no idea how the story progresses since I've only read up till around chapter 5. But I can already tell that this book is utter garbage and I will not waste anymore time reading a supposedly (if any) improvement on the authors part. Here are the reasons why: while the mc was still in the womb, he was given a system and around 100+ billion points to spend on something. And like any 'genius' mc he spent 200+ points in order to buy a bloodline which from my understanding can fused different bloodline together. Even if this was already quite absurd I could still endure the story, but the next part just sent me to a fit of super saiyan rage. FOR ONLY 1 BILLION points he had not only save kushina and minato from dying but also grant most of the side characters from the leaf village chakra levels that are at the same level as a 1 tailed jinchuriki. Ohh and did I mention that he was still in his mother's WOMB when he wished for it. Meaning that he still hasn't recieved the trust or loyalty of those he gave balance breaking powers to. And the best part? The mc wasnt told what family he was gonna be born in. So he if he were to be born on a nation that's enemies with konoha, then we could safely assume that he would be be royally focked. Seriously if this is what supposedly 'genius' MC grand plan, then I'm kinda looking forward to read about what the 'Idiotic' people would do.
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