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For hundreds of years, the Fire Kingdom is known to be the most powerful among all of the Elemental Realm. They house and protect the Elementium, the most powerful gemstone that controls nature's four elements.
The Fire Lord is known to be the mightiest ruler. However, it is no secret the lengths he have gone through in order to keep his power. He gets rid of anyone that dares usurp the Fire Kingdom's supremacy, committing sins and treacherous acts that resulted in multiple, albeit failed, rebellions.
When the Fire Lord takes the prince of the Valley of the Winds, Vale, as his adopted son and prisoner, the Wind Sultan then arranges a coup, gathering support and forming alliances to end the Fire Lord's wicked regime.
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amazing story i like it pls write more i need to know why the king is bad for the realm and why the sultan commit treason also if vale is part of the conspirscy thanks
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I gotta say I'm hooked! It's really well made. I love that Vale thinks he's doing the right thing but is guilty of what he did. The effort put to this is admirable, I hope you win the contest.
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It's still early but it's really well written. I hope this is yaoi because we need more mobile legends yaoi fic lol. I hope we also get more details about the world. I don't mind that it's first person point of view.
It's really good. I am reading so many entry for the mobile legends contest and this one caught my eye because it's interesting plot. I hope Vale and Valir end up together I'm a fujoshi
This is interesting! It's nicely written. I am not much of a fan of the first person POV but this one is bearable. I also love the character of Valir Vale. They have individual voices. Love it! Great job author!
I love the worldbuilding aspect. I want to hear more and it's nice that you mentioned the moon elves. I hope we can see more MLBB characters!
I've read a lot of the mobile legends fanfics and this is one of the best written! Interesting plot as well. Thanks author hope you update more
I love the first chapter. The combat scene is amazing, very detailed. I also like how Valir is characterized. A caring prince. I can't wait to know what happens next!
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This is so good that's why I can't for chapter 5 I hope you're still there and will be able to finish it.
I LOVE THIS!!! I really want to read the next chapter! Keep up the good work and like this is sp exciting! I’m not usually a big fan of reading, But I absolutly loved this!
I wasn't ready for this, seriously. I wasn't ready for this, seriously. I wasn't ready for this, seriously. I wasn't ready for this, seriously. I wasn't ready for this, seriously. I wasn't ready for this, seriously. Miss me with that gay sh*t
nice i like the story I have read many submissions in the mlbb webnovel crossover contest and this is one of the most promising pls write more thanks
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