/ Fantasy / A New World: Star Wars System
摘要
John was an average dude on Earth who shipped dirt for companies. He had an average life, family, and friends.
His only hobby was fiction. Science fiction, historical, whatever. John died one day and was given a Star Wars System. What will he do in a new world?
Any characters, lore, buildings, or weapons I use from Star Wars belong to Disney.
The characters I create for this story, if they could be used in others, are my original characters.
If I ever use a type of ship(Harrower-class dreadnought for example) I got the info from Wookiepedia.
Also, if I haven’t released a chapter in a while, I’m either taking a break for myself, or because of a holiday.
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I'm very sure the author is deleting reviews as you can't find any that are lower then 4 , i read few chapters and it is badly written, very rushed, and makes no sense some times(he dies for having dirt? I can understand this as it happens irl but he dies and goes to meet ROB as of they were buddies and when he gets revived he just goes with it ? he met some people and has no problem to sleep in the same place as them , like what of they decided he was dangerous for the village and just off him right there?)other then this it has decent potential
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Very very good fanfiction novel keep it going. It has great potential for growth and development. Please don't drop it. Thank you and i hope you can continue to entertain us Star wars fans
I read the description and tags and this novel seems interesting. It also seems original which I respect so this deserves 5 stars................
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Very entertaining. Writing quality is good, with little to no grammar errors. Story development has been pretty good, even with the sudden 4-year time skip. Character designs have been very good for a fan-fiction, as clones feel like clones. Overall, it's been a good read so far.
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I like it it’s cool but the whole king can open the door and use something without the system saying yo someone is trying to use your system droid making factor kinda blew me lol but I **** with it ✊🏽
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I really like this fanfic , the idea the execution are all flawless at fIrst i was Unsure about it but after a while i really started to enjoy it
The story is really interesting and enigmatic. I have expectations for all of this. An increase in the frequency of releases would be very good for addicts in the story, other than that it was really cool to read.
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😭 reality is poison! I hate this! I want to go back! take me back! I can't live like this! 😭 ROOAAAARRR Lambs to the cosmic slaughter!!!! 😭 reality is poison! I hate this! I want to go back! take me back! I can't live like this! 😭 ROOAAAARRR Lambs to the cosmic slaughter!!!!
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Strange spelling mistakes here and there.... But overall it's truly amazing story. Just read it. Don't like it, just leave.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,