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摘要
Revised Version:
Azeroth's Last Hope
General Audiences
標籤
-- 推薦票
榜單 
-- 推薦票 你也許也喜歡
4評論
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
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寫檢討
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honestly this lost my interest in the third chapter in the second chapter they are talking to the mc as if they know his future the dialogue feels unnatural, there is no development of character in the second chapter or third with the mother and sister is as if they only know how to kingdom business. What I mean is that there no natural feeling to how a family should feel. Then the icing on the cake taking the mc as a 4 year old to practice combat, bruh.
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Just because it's a story about WoW, it's worth reading. _____________________________________________________ Paladin is the best class lol
I hope you guys enjoy this fanfic! Shout out to all the Warcraft fans out there, and please give me feedback! Still learning how to be a writer, with limited time in my hands I‘ll make do with what I can with my ability. 🙌🏽