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a normal kid whose only desire was to be a hero has been destroyed by society and his only spark of light that has been making him go forward completely destroyed his dream
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Fun concept and i really like it! ..............................................................................................bruh
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Es una historia muy buena tiene un diseño de personajes y una evolución interesante. Pero algunas cosas se me hacen un poco forzadas pero sigue siendo muy buena historia. Es perfecta para pasar el tiempo y leer algo entretenido.
more chapter pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls
honestly this story is centered around one thing, the MC being cool and slick in every moment possible. Sly, confident, rebellious, strong. its very generic and cliche. not a horrible story for a fanfic just the MCs personality and story don't mesh at all. overall: average.
Writing Quality: Seems really good, doesn't seem to have any noticeable mistakes that will cause you to have to re-read it. Update Stability: updates seem to be frequent with enough time in-between them. It seems the author prepares 3 chapters and posts them 1 hour apart each. Story development: MHA where it seems like females are dominants over men, a common fanfic idea. Development seems to be going at a nice rate not going to fast or slow. Character Design: MC is a OC!Izuku where he has a terrible mother which causes him to have a lot of trust issues and built up emotion, hopefully we can see some improvement with the help of UA when the author get's there. World Background: MHA world where woman dominate over men, Men seem to be treated poorly while woman are cast upon a high pedestal. Some characters seem to be gender-bent such as Katsuki and All-Might (Maybe Endeavor to but I didn't seem an indication.). Personally I like this type of background because the character personality's for people beside Inko and Izuku doesn't seem to be changed to much which is nice I hope you enjoyed my review, definitely going to keep reading this if it continues nicely
Epic book pls continue this book and never drop this book man.. .. .. .. .. .. .✌🏻✌🏻✌🏻✌🏻✌🏻✌🏻✌🏻✌🏻✌🏻✌🏻✌🏻✌🏻✌🏻✌🏻✌🏻✌🏻✌🏻✌🏻✌🏻✌🏻
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nice. too nice. are real?hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
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This is a very good book and i dont know anything that can help improve it so i will say what i like in it i like in it it has a interesting main character and it shows pretty well how he thinls and his struggle slowly becoming apparent that he is not able to understand how he feels toward the people around him.
*Gender bending gun exist* Author: . . . . . .