/ TV / A GAMER IN THE MULTIVERSE
摘要
An average man leveling up through the multiverse, good thing he was a gamer beforehand.
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-- 推薦票
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寫檢討
it's too interesting. the MC is the brother of Rock Star and the writer has a good idea of The Gamer's ability. the fights are well done, according to the level and age of the MC. and a tip for the writer. prepare hot scenes, * Enter you from Toreto (Fast and Furious) * "That we are in The Game of Thrones" (I use google translator, in case you don't understand something)
A decent run at a gamer system. some judgement is a flaw with most writers and that lacking details. if you approach it as if you are writing the original, you would do things such as introduce some of the characters background some lore that some people may not know if they are new to the show/books
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It’s a very good fanfic but it has been a month since the last update. Is it dropped ? ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ...............
Keep it up. Val for only or first wife.😏😏😏 140 charachters 140 charachters 140 charachters 140 charachters 140 charachters 140 charachters 140charachters 140 charachters 140 charachters 140 charachters 140 charachters 140 charachters 140 charachters 140 charachters 140charachters