/ Book&Literature / A Game of Bast
摘要
In a galaxy far, far away, a skilled Jedi Knight named Malik, guided by the Panther God Bast, finds himself transported to the Game of Thrones universe in the land of Westeros.
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Ive seen other authors fall into the trap like this author has, instead of actually writing a story with characters that are fleshed out and have unique developments and Nice dialogue, he has instead chosen to just write a summary of events instead of a story. The story has no interaction between characters, no action, nothing of substance, it is just a summary of What happens.
If I hear someone say that black people can't make up stories I'll hit them, but man (author) you're not helping JOKE. you make a taco with lots of stuff but the mixture is not coherent even if the result is good, no one will want to eat it
your prologue dont make sense at all , starwars then bast from marvel then gameofthrones -_- .. comon dude make sene.......................................