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摘要
The Supreme Magus, one of the strongest beings in the Divine Realm, teacher of 100 God Heroes, died to protect the world from his corrupted self. With a stroke of luck, he landed in the world of Terra. Many years had passed before he woke up again. Just as he's beginning his journey on this new world, he suddenly received an invitation to a Chat Group--a chat group that connects many parallel worlds.
Rediscovering his past, recovering his strength, and even surpassing his past self. Step by step, he would become stronger, and all of that starts from a chat group.
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Arknights/ Fate (Zero & Grand Order)/ Muv-Luv Alternative / Oreimo / Chuunibyou Demo Koi ga Shita! / Sword Art Online / Azur Lane / Puella Magi Madoka Magica / Fate/stay night / Re:creators
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Advanced chapters on my Patron link:
www.p*****n.com/IdleYoungMaster
PS: The world before Terra is my OC world if you're wondering.
(The world of Terra (Arknights) will be the main world. Other than that, you could expect the usual from a chat group novel.)
Updates: 1 Chapter per day
Note: The cover photo is not mine.
Cover made by HoracioGui
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If anyone reads this I thought this was good originally. Author follows the plot for most anime, games etc. Nothing new or original. However the author goes or will go the gender bend route. MC turns into a Loli author thought it was cool. To be frank for me makes no sense. Says it temporary but author does it more than once. It shouldn’t even be a thing but he makes it one. So your hoping for masculine goes outside the canon plot. Is not willing to pursue a girl’s who is close to the other anime MC’s. Loses all self respect for me and the audience. No one asked for gender confusion. Wish there was tag to save me time from investing in this novel. Welp hope this helps anyone. Peace.
This is the first time I've read an Arknights fanfic. The writing quality is good with some confusing dialogues here and there at the start, but overall readable, interesting and not bland, and manages to convey what it wants to the readers(unlike other fanfics on this site with a completely bland writing quality and feels like reading a math book). It's too early to comment about other things but the writing quality is great.
of all things "cool loli" you really choose? i expecting some like cliche where everyone mistaken him as a girl but you really turn him to a girl i didn't play ark night, but i really like this novel so imagine how torture for me to search everything i don't know in google, i kept repeating it until the gender swap part i drop i don't know what kind author fetish have (i was just curious not insulting his fetish, everyone can have different fetish even questionable one) why he choose that setting when he can just give mc item can power him up without gender swap effect
Chapter 55 (54) writing quality - understandable story development - ok too I guess, author have their own plot for the main world and have their own plots so far. Character design - Pretty ok too, unless you're into mc who's into "dominate this dominate that", "I have a power so I can do what tf I want" or smth, then leave. Mc also doesn't show a sign of stupidity yet so cool. updating stability - good world background - so far it's good
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I'm not very good at giving reviews Story jumps around too much, introduces too many characters and casts them aside never to be seen again when author finds it convenient Arcs are not really satisfying, too much time is spent on the unimportant things and not enough on character development and interactions (strongest part of the story) The MC is paradoxically too strong and too weak, he has crazy luck and gets many OP powers but it's too many for me to keep track of and they hardly ever matter at all, fights will be as difficult as the author feels like it even if it doesn't make much sense
Boring. Unnecessary power ups and skillsunsatisfying fights Mc turning into loli ? are you sick in the head? even if it is temporary.pacing of the story is also bad.
as Casual reader who didn't or haven't watch any anime/game from this fanfic, I'm confused af. currently at ch10 if we include prologue. I feels like author write the novel thinking all reader know the information/references from each anime/game. so many terms not being explained(even system stats), also author adding 'character' without introducing it to reader(like kalsit's mont3r, she never tell us that's her monster's name, I don't know if it's even the name, I assume it is). so reading this novel made me bored and lost my motivation because of confusion/lack of information. should add a note in the synopsis to reader first that this novel required to read the original IP first. it can be a good read if you gave us explanation about what is what.
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i would love to have a dimensional chat group *sigh* unfortunately that will never happen 😭😭😭.........................................................
The first Arknights ff i ever read, pretty decent but another so handsome mc that can mistaken as a girl with op power cards… i kinda got tired of it, same with japanese beta mc that i got tired of, and now beautiful op mc… sigh… Worth giving a try
i'll say your story is good but the mc is too dependent to his past power scalling is too absurd that i'm not even sure how to enjoy it it's worth reading but not make me itching wait for next chapter
Good enough writing, And a pretty good execution. My only problem with this fanfiction is the Author's tendency to just pull stuff from nothing and explain it as background info he'll explain later, most of it is explained later but feels unnecessary for the most part, including the MC background.
This is the only thing I can do!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!nnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnmmmm🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂
This is the very first Arknights fic that I have seen here in webnovel. I hope that the author doest just drop it. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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I like almost everything about this story but what really annoys me is that every time the MC gets too many rewards to use them, he gets interrupted, like you don't have creativity or...
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TLDR: quick explaination og plots, reasonable character improvement, no 2D personality waifus, and MC NOT DENSE A good fiction novel. My favorite aspects of the story are [resonable good-ending] and [character development]. As a fiction novel, its main goal is to provide the characters with a deserving ending, and the author succeeded in doing so. Not only do the characters receive a good ending, but they also undergo a reasonable growth and improvement in their mentality throughout the story. Unlike some authors who twist the characters original personalities 360° in the aftermath. Another aspect of the novel that I appreciated is the harem. Often, in fiction, the author will simply throw in a collection of waifus for the main character and call it a day. However, in this book, the main character and the women develop their feelings for each other over a long period of time, starting as friends and eventually becoming a couple. It's also worth mentioning that MC is not dense. He realized if a girl is into him or not. And not all women he met end up in the harem. Their relationships are not forced. P.S. It took 200 ch for a girl to be his girlfriend. Fret not! there are romance along the way.