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摘要
World travelled to far, in order: Arifureta, Ankoku Kishi Monogatari,
Disclaimer: THE COVER IS NOT MINE. If you are the owner and want it removed, let me know. All characters used in this fanfiction are not mine except the OCs. All characters go to their respective owners.
====Synopsis
If one asked the terrifying strong beings that lives throughout space, they would undoubtedly say, “it’s the one that lives at the center of all.”
...
A man who had been studying aboard for a long time, finally returns back to his homeland.
But unfortunately, Fate had other plans for him.
Due to an unfortunate event, ended up separated from his family during a world transportation. Using the system that he has, he becomes stronger in hope of reuniting with his family. but along the way, he finds out his true identity as well as meet companions that he will deeply care for. Even Fate didn't foresee that thing that she shook awake...
That thing called—
Or so they thought...
========Extra Info
ENGLISH IS NOT MY FIRST LANGUAGE SO EXPECT SOME MISTAKES SUCH AS GRAMMAR AND BAD USE OF WORDS.
WARNING! A BIT OF NETORARE IN CHAPTER 2 (When the MC's father cheated on the MC's mother) BUT THAT’S IT.
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I like the multi-world idea. I just hope that the family gets together in the next arc so that we have home lovey-dovey *ahem* family time.
Ok... I've only manged to hold on till the 4th chapter. At some point when the headache this caused wears off I'll continue. Here's my opinion so far. Good points: -I really can't say at this moment. Bad points: -Grammar is kinda weak. You could work on sentence structure more. -Characters need way more building for the pace the story is going at. -As mentioned above, it's going too fast. REALLY Bad points: -The plot is so forced it feels like I'm being forced to deep throat a foot long. -4 chapters in and no world building which is slightly ok considering the world hopping in the coming chapter. -Why use 4 chapters to convey repetitive and useless info? -The Tbh I don't understand or know anything about the characters or power scaling or anything for that matter because every thing is all over the place. I hope this improves somewhere along the line. Not bashing because I wasn't to see where you take your passion. Also if the 'NTR' was the cheating I'd suggest you remove the tag and add it to the summary because you may have lost a lot more readers from it.
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author, your story has no logic, first, the hero is almost stronger than maldi only at level 1, with stats of 100, then our mc has more than 2,000 stats and some random black adventurer appears and almost defeats the MC and the author still says it's for lack of experience, please, having more experience wouldn't be able to jump over 2000 in stats, the difference is huge, if you want to make your MC weak instead of nerfing your MC meaningless, just give it low statistics.
the first time I thought his mother was the MC Uh, but I was wrong *****************"*************************************************""**************************************"************""
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Plzzzz dont drop. This fanfic is really goood and I cant wait for more chapters. Even if some say that the grammar and sentence structure is not good but for a new writer I guess this fanfic is good enough. You just need to be patient with the info and stuff.
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I like the plot, but I hope that the update rate would increase later. EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP
Hello, I just want to say that when I first started this book, it was written purely out of my fascination for novels, and me wanting to improve my writing abilities through the readers’ feedbacks. This led to the first dozen of chapters to be bad. But now that I noticed that there were people who were enjoying reading this Fanfiction, I will try my best to not disappoint you guys with new chapters from now on. Anways, happy reading! :)