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A Chance to become a Adonis

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作者: Teaisnice

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At the age of 32, Lu Chen lost his life, and as he slowly lost his life, all he saw was his wife embracing her lover

He couldn't believe his eyes and wanted to stop them, but nothing, he could only sit there and watch them with tears in his eyes.

All the people that he had lost in following his wife, hatred being to form in him, but he could do anything anymore.

As he lost his consciousness he wanted revenge, but more than this, he wanted a second chance to change.

What will happen when he is given a second chance.

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ps. I might change the name later on

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GodOfDeath1999

The story is slow paced but it’s overall good. If there had to be one problem I have with this novel it’s his ex wife every time she appears in the story she acts like a total ***** and she can completely ruin a chapter just by appearing the worst part is the MC doesn’t really have a plan to get revenge on her despite her basically running his past life.

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Alex_Mirabile

currently chapter 28: I didn't see many novels with male leads in the role of the typical female lead being the center of all stares with it being all there is to it. Usually they will attract with being powerful/skillfull/famous/CEO etc.. that is to say, they become popular only with their looks. I really hope the author will be careful with the male lead developpement, because for now he seems really unstable, the shyness of a 13yo, the experience of a +28, the despair of death and rejection, the lack of love in the past life, while still being able to have friendly relationships with people his current age.. It's not a bad review of him, simply with the choices he makes he may becomes awfully immature and i hope it doesn't happen. Sadly we still don' have anything about the past life relationships with some of the ( seems like ) principal characters, but it's fine as it is very early. Hope for many many releases, thanks for your work!

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Keraaaa

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