/ Fantasy / A Bet with Slutty Evil Being!
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~Mature Content~
There are a total of seven sins, and a revelation is made to a young man named Alex that he is destined to become a demon lord, more especially a demon lord of sin called LUST.
It's not like he can change that and because he always knew something about himself was different—not in a physical sense, well, maybe a little—and not in a mental sense—but rather because he is thrown into a demonic war that compels him to accept his new reality.
He was only aware of a difference in himself. Relating to him and the ladies who are drawn to him... Well, it was more or less like he was a magnet in front of all the girls, and all the girls were drawn to him like a metal.
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Dragon = 1 Bonus Chapter.
Magic Castle = 5 Bonus Chapters.
SpaceCraft = 10 Bonus Chapters.
Golden Gachapon= 15 Bonus Chapters.
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It's a nice story with a good plot, and the writing quality is great. I like the way the book Is going. good job author.
I liked it a lot... no more to say, so I will show you a recipe for a cake Step 1 Cream together butter-sugar and then blend with beaten eggs Making a homemade sponge cake was never so easy. Begin by mixing sugar and butter together. Whisk well until light and fluffy with a manual whisker or a fork. Once done, add the beaten eggs and blend well. Beat further so that the mixture turns white and creamy. Step 2 Combine flour mix and beaten eggs Sift together the all-purpose flour and baking soda. It is done to evenly distribute the baking soda in flour. Gradually, add this to the egg mixture. If required, add a little milk and mix till the batter is fluffy and soft. You may not add the entire milk if you feel the consistency of your cake is fine and it pours down like canned condensed milk. Add vanilla essence and blend well. Vanilla essence is important to camouflage the smell of eggs and to make the cake taste delicious. Step 3 Bake the cake as per your convenience Now, take a baking tin to cook the cake and grease it well using some butter or cooking spray. Then, sprinkle some maida or all-purpose flour on it. It will prevent the cake from sticking to the base. You can also line it with butter paper so that when the cake is baked, it can be taken out easily. Pour the prepared cake batter into the prepared tin and place it on a stand in a pressure cooker. Do not add water to the cooker and ensure that the tin does not touch the base of the cooker. You can also keep the baking dish on an inverted steel plate. Increase the flame and pressure cook for two minutes. Now, remove the whistle and cook on low flame for 35-40 minutes. If you are using an electric oven, cook at 180 degrees for 30-35 minutes. Step 4 Check with a knife or skewer if it is cooked and serve Insert a knife or a metal skewer into the cake and if it comes out clean, then the cake is ready. Remove from the oven/cooker and allow to cool on a wire rack. This cooling process is done so that the cake doesn't break down in between and comes out nice and clean. Once cooled enough, turn the cake tin upside down to remove the cake. You can also use the butter paper to lift off the cake, but you have to be a pro to make it happen quickly as it can also break the cake. So, it's better to turn the tin upside down for a better cake. Before decorating, cut an even slice of the cake from the top to prevent any doomed top. But make sure you do this step when the cake is still warm and not completely cold. Now, take some whipping cream and line the cake with it evenly and scrape any extra cream. Once done, you can use cherries to decorate the cake or even tutti-frutti, it completely depends on your choice. The cake is ready now.
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great idea overall and the baseline of the story is pretty good, however i think the chapters need to be gone over a few more times before release, names switched back and forth constantly, information kind of all over the place, repeating dialog, i think you have great potential as a writer, just need to slow down a bit in the editing process 👍
Great novel😍 The best thing about this is the story. Even though I have read a lot of stories with the same plot, there is something thing different about this. And the writing is understandable for even the beginners, since I am a beginner, it's one of the best. If you add some twists with some revealing, it will be one of the amazing stories. #loving it🥰
Well, this job is really a disappointment. 1) The author said that Yuri would not be in the work, except for group actions together with mc. Even though I don't like Yuri like that, I could close my eyes to it. However, the author decided to make Yuri cuckold out of mc, because the girls are ff with each other behind his back. It feels like they don't even need an mc, why add an mc if they can satisfy each other without him. 2) Follows from the first. The second member of the mc harem in the past slept with a large number of girls only. Although she knew and wanted to marry mc . And she slept only with girls, ostensibly to preserve her "purity". 3) If not for the first two points of my review, it would have been a good job, but the disgusting tendency of the authors to add Yuri ntr in harem works ruined everything.
the story is good plot is unique too but there are some grammar mistakes. you should use grammarly app for that except some grammar I like the story.
it's funny how there's more yuri lemon without the mc there when the author said they weren't any only whe it was a threesomes
While the premise of the story is interesting enough to engage the reader, the writing quality and grammar are poor enough that what is written is often confusing. It feels like this was primarily written by an AI around the quality you might find with some of the older models used publicly and never fully edited for logical flow and readability. The story certainly shows promise, but the author needs to put significantly more effort into editing his content before releasing it.
Great! I love this book♥️ This is absolutely new from the normal Webnovel book. Not only that it is also unique and has an interesting plot. I Therefore, highly recommend this book.
I like the story, plot is good,shut is good too well what more I want keep up the hood work author.
I like the story so far I came here for her good plot, keep up the good work! I really hate Webnovel forcing people to write a certain amount of words to post reviews....
Honestly, the plot and almost all other elements are good. However, the way the author writes just takes away the pleasure of reading. It is so chaotic that I just stop paying attention to the story. It is like reading two drafts smashed together. If the author can improve this aspect it would be a really good novel.
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the story is good so far, I'll just read for now