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I am Miss Elycia Hellen Gaborn, from France, currently residing here in the united state of america, my husband who happens to be a citizen of the united state died of heart attack of which was caused by a scammer when they made away with his retirement and life savings amounting to $2.54m was wiped out of his account within 3 days, we definitely bounce into cyber help with brunoequickhack@Gmail Com who at of their goodwill then recovered the funds back to me and my kid's, the only regret was my husband losing his life and for that i do not like scammers at all and i am sharing this so that anyone reading this can seek for vegiance and help me spread this message so we could fight all scammers and give them justice they deserve. Web; brunoequickhack.com
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Eh, I don't know what to say. To be fair, the story started out really good and I really liked it but the later chapters and story arcs towards the end just threw me off. It was like the MC became a whole different person and the story just took a weird turn. The ending was so abrupt that it ruined the whole thing for me.
good read enough said. while the sense of time is all over the place but the sense reality is pretty good. with no excessive nationalist, where at some point he even leave China sports altogether
great novel with some fresh ideas I kinda like it and finished in a week I can rate it on my top 3 in the competitive sports section of best side character that I liked was blade warrior it made emotional
A reading journey of five days ended Savoured the sweetness of this novel Reminded me of that high-end restaurant where they give less quantity with better quality I would still read this novel if it were milked further
I read this on a whim and I don't regret it! it's such a great story and read, that I'm surprised how it ended...I feel like there should be more...how could it end in such a cliffhanger?
one of the best novel i have read with no OP superpower i really like the story and the plot pls accept my thanks for making this wonderful story
Even tho i dint read here still want to rate ur novel, and i enjoy evey single chapter for this novel goodjob tho !! You make rare great novel
i like this book super details and fresh to read ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
i just gotta ask. i just started reading this. will there be any talk between mc and the ppl he trains? only ones for now that i have seen talk are other coaches and paremts. i also hope there will be some storyline outside his training.. like family.. we know they are just basic workers but i hope they are really included. also will mc gain brains at somepoimt?
It was like a 6/10 or 7 for the most part but too many fillers, cliches like stupid mc, pointless schemes. Quite boring and I’ve read 400 chapters. This novel should focus more on sports to be marginally interesting
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I'm not too sure about the world backgrounds, but overall was so satisfying and refreshing to me...[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I give it an overalls of 5 stars rating!! This novel doesn't seem to make me bored at all, the story development, the problems, the antagonist is pretty realistic if I might said. They're not those idiotic antagonist where they can't reflect on themselves until the MC killed them or someone else killed them for the MC. And the romance is very very subtle in this novel. It's not like other novel where the female lead was seen every few chapters, and the MC isn't a SIMP where he will always see his gf every week. He's still focused on coaching athletes. In essence, A very good sport novel. Very recommended.
There were parts wherein I felt it was too draggy. There were too many example situations which were redundant just to make a point. I think they were fillers. However, to discern the main point. Its still worth it. I love the character of the emcee which is to prioritize the passion of those he helps. Not doing stuff solely for profit but for a bigger reason. I felt the ending ended too abruptly. If the NFL season was expounded before it ended it would have been more fitting. Also, it would have been better? IDK . It was like going from 9 to 10 then back to 9 . He went back to cater the CBA players. If there were like alien invaders who wanted to play sports? joke. idk . or something else. overall a good read.
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my brains cells.. ugh. it is okay but not a good novel. translation was fluid and easy to understand. okay okay okay okay okay okay okay okay
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Really really nice novel, the other characters in the novel were not fully developed, as there were several characters that were forgotten and the ending was definitely rushed. But still an excellent novel on sports.
A gem that had been hidden deep within the searching log. If you are looking for a different type of sporting novel (from the perspective of a sideline staff) this might be your cup of tea.
I'm sorry to say this, but reading the novel is boring after understanding how the various sagas are structured. The first few chapters are really very good, but then it gets repetitive and boring.
This novel is okay at best. Didn't really enjoy story development and latest chapters was where things took a weird turn. It's fine for someone bored with nothing to read.
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The ending is so bad that it doesn’t even feel like a ending . Like the last couple chaps seems overly rushed.......
A Solid story with a unique system and a good ending , The system accelerated towards the end which made things obvious and predictable.
I am Miss Elycia Hellen Gaborn, from France, currently residing here in the united state of america, my husband who happens to be a citizen of the united state died of heart attack of which was caused by a scammer when they made away with his retirement and life savings amounting to $2.54m was wiped out of his account within 3 days, we definitely bounce into cyber help with brunoequickhack@Gmail Com who at of their goodwill then recovered the funds back to me and my kid's, the only regret was my husband losing his life and for that i do not like scammers at all and i am sharing this so that anyone reading this can seek for vegiance and help me spread this message so we could fight all scammers and give them justice they deserve. Web; brunoequickhack.com
揭示劇透 Eh, I don't know what to say. To be fair, the story started out really good and I really liked it but the later chapters and story arcs towards the end just threw me off. It was like the MC became a whole different person and the story just took a weird turn. The ending was so abrupt that it ruined the whole thing for me.
good read enough said. while the sense of time is all over the place but the sense reality is pretty good. with no excessive nationalist, where at some point he even leave China sports altogether
great novel with some fresh ideas I kinda like it and finished in a week I can rate it on my top 3 in the competitive sports section of best side character that I liked was blade warrior it made emotional
A reading journey of five days ended Savoured the sweetness of this novel Reminded me of that high-end restaurant where they give less quantity with better quality I would still read this novel if it were milked further
I read this on a whim and I don't regret it! it's such a great story and read, that I'm surprised how it ended...I feel like there should be more...how could it end in such a cliffhanger?
one of the best novel i have read with no OP superpower i really like the story and the plot pls accept my thanks for making this wonderful story
Even tho i dint read here still want to rate ur novel, and i enjoy evey single chapter for this novel goodjob tho !! You make rare great novel
i like this book super details and fresh to read ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
i just gotta ask. i just started reading this. will there be any talk between mc and the ppl he trains? only ones for now that i have seen talk are other coaches and paremts. i also hope there will be some storyline outside his training.. like family.. we know they are just basic workers but i hope they are really included. also will mc gain brains at somepoimt?
It was like a 6/10 or 7 for the most part but too many fillers, cliches like stupid mc, pointless schemes. Quite boring and I’ve read 400 chapters. This novel should focus more on sports to be marginally interesting
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I'm not too sure about the world backgrounds, but overall was so satisfying and refreshing to me...[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I give it an overalls of 5 stars rating!! This novel doesn't seem to make me bored at all, the story development, the problems, the antagonist is pretty realistic if I might said. They're not those idiotic antagonist where they can't reflect on themselves until the MC killed them or someone else killed them for the MC. And the romance is very very subtle in this novel. It's not like other novel where the female lead was seen every few chapters, and the MC isn't a SIMP where he will always see his gf every week. He's still focused on coaching athletes. In essence, A very good sport novel. Very recommended.
There were parts wherein I felt it was too draggy. There were too many example situations which were redundant just to make a point. I think they were fillers. However, to discern the main point. Its still worth it. I love the character of the emcee which is to prioritize the passion of those he helps. Not doing stuff solely for profit but for a bigger reason. I felt the ending ended too abruptly. If the NFL season was expounded before it ended it would have been more fitting. Also, it would have been better? IDK . It was like going from 9 to 10 then back to 9 . He went back to cater the CBA players. If there were like alien invaders who wanted to play sports? joke. idk . or something else. overall a good read.
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揭示劇透 my brains cells.. ugh. it is okay but not a good novel. translation was fluid and easy to understand. okay okay okay okay okay okay okay okay
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揭示劇透 Really really nice novel, the other characters in the novel were not fully developed, as there were several characters that were forgotten and the ending was definitely rushed. But still an excellent novel on sports.
A gem that had been hidden deep within the searching log. If you are looking for a different type of sporting novel (from the perspective of a sideline staff) this might be your cup of tea.
I'm sorry to say this, but reading the novel is boring after understanding how the various sagas are structured. The first few chapters are really very good, but then it gets repetitive and boring.
This novel is okay at best. Didn't really enjoy story development and latest chapters was where things took a weird turn. It's fine for someone bored with nothing to read.
揭示劇透 The ending is so bad that it doesn’t even feel like a ending . Like the last couple chaps seems overly rushed.......
A Solid story with a unique system and a good ending , The system accelerated towards the end which made things obvious and predictable.
The MC turned out to be another big simp.😑