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Wow, read 42 chapters so far, there were a lot of stuff I did not like, but still am reading, I can say without a doubt I'm addicted, and there's 1.5k chapters yay
I can't imagine what kind of brain damage a person should suffer to make a blatant spoiler for the whole novel straight in the first chapter. Amount of water and fillers in this novel are immeasurable. The plot is dull and boring to death. All storytelling looks like some logs from a game and financial reports. Ending was abrupt and incomplete. This novel is a waste of time. Only around first 50 chapters was somewhat interesting. All what followed was MC recollection of his past actions, characteristics of his equipment, countless repeating of the same things about world rules and discussions about where to go and in what colour paint walls in the MC's city. Remember your most boring work meeting - that's the content of this novel.
Great story but some of the spelling and grammer could use work. I love how the characters stayed the same in many ways but changed every so slightly leading to bigger changes later on as the story progressed rather than something big happens to cause every change.
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good book a lot of miss spelled and miss used words but the plot and character design is well established and utilized well. it is a slow read but worth it over all
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There was once a little boy, he fought bitter battles an celebrated victory against his own weakness. He fought against Gods to protect his dear family. The story ended but the journey continues.
Hi, This is Tynan, I am an editor from another platform that focuses on adventurous Genre Fictions. After reading your “Badge in Azure”, I decided to contact you and if possible, to extend you an invitation on distributing your works. However, there are so little I can talk about it here. If you were interested, please contact me via geekyteddyyo@gmail.com, then I should take opportunity to discuss it with you in detail. It was a great pleasure to meet your story. Sincerely Tynan
so far, the character development is enjoyable. i can see there is a lot of thought put into the level and lower structure of the world. the story line is linear, which isn't a terrible thing. the sense of adventure is there.
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Very repetitive reads. Sometime auhtor explains stuff which he explained previous chapter or often previous paragraphs. Apart from that good magic system. Good MC. Initially story is bit slow. But later on picks up pace. At chapter 992... Hopefully it ends with a proper finale.
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The MC is somewhat a dumbass for letting his greed, curiosity and his obsession for getting stronger consume him into forgetting to follow simple and easy instructions
Saleen Metatrin, what a name to have for an epic fantasy! Overall a very well developed story with a good slow progression which doesn't pigeonhole our MC as OP. It has a significant amount of slow parts sure, but overall that's what makes this story that much more believable in the later arcs when the MC's hard work finally begins to bear fruit. This story is truly a gem among gems. I highly recommend this story! 😏
This story is terrible. The MC is ridiculously stupid despite being a beggar and gets even dumber after learning magic. BS’s his way through everything with no real goal in sight with just as bad companions. There is no consistency or thought put into the novel like he gets hit by a book that is 1 metre wide and half a metre thick, that book would kill him because it’s so heavy. Place names got mixed up like it was the Myer continent and them the Metalhin or what ever his family name is continent. Just don’t read, licking the pavement would be more enjoyable than reading this.
Ay first I was excited to read this. I should have read the reviews first. Naive MC couples with a rush plot. It has average world building. I would look elsewhere for a good read.
Probably the laziest writing I've seen in a long time. If you can see past the clichés and the common tropes, you might enjoy it. This ain't for me.
Honestly speaking, this is a good story. But the author doesn't seem to have his script figured out; at times we're stranded in a sea of paragraphs that details ONE fight against a character that is: 1. Not essential to the story, 2. We won't ever remember them in the next ten chapters. But fret not this novel has plenty of good things to keep you on its ship. What I appreciate the most is that this novel keeps some semblance of originality, which is getting pathetically rare nowadays, and what's more is that some of the sidekicks have character background that rival that of the MC, and they've their own thoughts and ambitions, some of which even conflict with that of the MC. The plot is good, but at the same time gets you thinking and engages you in the "what if" scenarios. Give this novel a shot, you'd like it I'm sure
This looks interesting so Im going to save this book and read it eventually, when? I'm not sure, but I will because I haven't read a novel about a (what appears to be by the bio) normal wizard thag just van get into trouble.
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Its good. Read it . ..... . . . . . . . . . . . . . . ... .j . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . JUST READ IT!!!
Amaing to read!!! I can't stop reading. Amazing!! I can definitely recommend this book to you!! I like it a lot! A great book if you like magic!
My apologies but i cant stand this novel, super cliche i mean cliche is normal in this web (at least cliche with characters). Story line is abstract, mc is the type i hate the möst and no brain. Uggghh i need to stop ✋, anyway i still need to thank the hardwörk of the translator and editors 👋🍻
this is interesting i never thought i would find this intersting book .. all i can say whoever read this novel would never waste their time reading and they would enjoy this.....................
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Circumcision is the removal of the foreskin from the human penis. In the most common procedure, the foreskin is opened, adhesions are removed, and the foreskin is separated from the glans. After that, a circumcision device may be placed, and then the foreskin is cut off. Topical or locally injected anesthesia is used to reduce pain and physiologic stress. The procedure is most often an elective surgery performed on babies and children, for religious or cultural reasons. In other cases it may be done as a treatment for certain medical conditions or for preventative reasons. Medically it is a treatment option for problematic cases of phimosis, balanoposthitis that does not resolve with other treatments, and chronic urinary tract infections (UTIs). It is contraindicated in cases of certain genital structure abnormalities or poor general health.
It’s not bad, but honestly it feels like you’re reading an excel spreadsheet. If I didn’t like mages and magic systems I probably wouldn’t have bothered reading 1000 chapters myself tbh
Wow, read 42 chapters so far, there were a lot of stuff I did not like, but still am reading, I can say without a doubt I'm addicted, and there's 1.5k chapters yay
I can't imagine what kind of brain damage a person should suffer to make a blatant spoiler for the whole novel straight in the first chapter. Amount of water and fillers in this novel are immeasurable. The plot is dull and boring to death. All storytelling looks like some logs from a game and financial reports. Ending was abrupt and incomplete. This novel is a waste of time. Only around first 50 chapters was somewhat interesting. All what followed was MC recollection of his past actions, characteristics of his equipment, countless repeating of the same things about world rules and discussions about where to go and in what colour paint walls in the MC's city. Remember your most boring work meeting - that's the content of this novel.
Great story but some of the spelling and grammer could use work. I love how the characters stayed the same in many ways but changed every so slightly leading to bigger changes later on as the story progressed rather than something big happens to cause every change.
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good book a lot of miss spelled and miss used words but the plot and character design is well established and utilized well. it is a slow read but worth it over all
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There was once a little boy, he fought bitter battles an celebrated victory against his own weakness. He fought against Gods to protect his dear family. The story ended but the journey continues.
Hi, This is Tynan, I am an editor from another platform that focuses on adventurous Genre Fictions. After reading your “Badge in Azure”, I decided to contact you and if possible, to extend you an invitation on distributing your works. However, there are so little I can talk about it here. If you were interested, please contact me via geekyteddyyo@gmail.com, then I should take opportunity to discuss it with you in detail. It was a great pleasure to meet your story. Sincerely Tynan
so far, the character development is enjoyable. i can see there is a lot of thought put into the level and lower structure of the world. the story line is linear, which isn't a terrible thing. the sense of adventure is there.
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Very repetitive reads. Sometime auhtor explains stuff which he explained previous chapter or often previous paragraphs. Apart from that good magic system. Good MC. Initially story is bit slow. But later on picks up pace. At chapter 992... Hopefully it ends with a proper finale.
揭示劇透 Not a review Not a review Not a review Not a review Not a review Not a review Not a review Not a review Not a review Not a review Not a review Not a review
揭示劇透 The MC is somewhat a dumbass for letting his greed, curiosity and his obsession for getting stronger consume him into forgetting to follow simple and easy instructions
Saleen Metatrin, what a name to have for an epic fantasy! Overall a very well developed story with a good slow progression which doesn't pigeonhole our MC as OP. It has a significant amount of slow parts sure, but overall that's what makes this story that much more believable in the later arcs when the MC's hard work finally begins to bear fruit. This story is truly a gem among gems. I highly recommend this story! 😏
This story is terrible. The MC is ridiculously stupid despite being a beggar and gets even dumber after learning magic. BS’s his way through everything with no real goal in sight with just as bad companions. There is no consistency or thought put into the novel like he gets hit by a book that is 1 metre wide and half a metre thick, that book would kill him because it’s so heavy. Place names got mixed up like it was the Myer continent and them the Metalhin or what ever his family name is continent. Just don’t read, licking the pavement would be more enjoyable than reading this.
Ay first I was excited to read this. I should have read the reviews first. Naive MC couples with a rush plot. It has average world building. I would look elsewhere for a good read.
Probably the laziest writing I've seen in a long time. If you can see past the clichés and the common tropes, you might enjoy it. This ain't for me.
Honestly speaking, this is a good story. But the author doesn't seem to have his script figured out; at times we're stranded in a sea of paragraphs that details ONE fight against a character that is: 1. Not essential to the story, 2. We won't ever remember them in the next ten chapters. But fret not this novel has plenty of good things to keep you on its ship. What I appreciate the most is that this novel keeps some semblance of originality, which is getting pathetically rare nowadays, and what's more is that some of the sidekicks have character background that rival that of the MC, and they've their own thoughts and ambitions, some of which even conflict with that of the MC. The plot is good, but at the same time gets you thinking and engages you in the "what if" scenarios. Give this novel a shot, you'd like it I'm sure
This looks interesting so Im going to save this book and read it eventually, when? I'm not sure, but I will because I haven't read a novel about a (what appears to be by the bio) normal wizard thag just van get into trouble.
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Its good. Read it . ..... . . . . . . . . . . . . . . ... .j . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . JUST READ IT!!!
Amaing to read!!! I can't stop reading. Amazing!! I can definitely recommend this book to you!! I like it a lot! A great book if you like magic!
My apologies but i cant stand this novel, super cliche i mean cliche is normal in this web (at least cliche with characters). Story line is abstract, mc is the type i hate the möst and no brain. Uggghh i need to stop ✋, anyway i still need to thank the hardwörk of the translator and editors 👋🍻
this is interesting i never thought i would find this intersting book .. all i can say whoever read this novel would never waste their time reading and they would enjoy this.....................
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Circumcision is the removal of the foreskin from the human penis. In the most common procedure, the foreskin is opened, adhesions are removed, and the foreskin is separated from the glans. After that, a circumcision device may be placed, and then the foreskin is cut off. Topical or locally injected anesthesia is used to reduce pain and physiologic stress. The procedure is most often an elective surgery performed on babies and children, for religious or cultural reasons. In other cases it may be done as a treatment for certain medical conditions or for preventative reasons. Medically it is a treatment option for problematic cases of phimosis, balanoposthitis that does not resolve with other treatments, and chronic urinary tract infections (UTIs). It is contraindicated in cases of certain genital structure abnormalities or poor general health.
It’s not bad, but honestly it feels like you’re reading an excel spreadsheet. If I didn’t like mages and magic systems I probably wouldn’t have bothered reading 1000 chapters myself tbh