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4.13

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Aesir03
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Aesir03
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aaelite2

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Sajaya_Kumar

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Muhammad_Bello_9797

What the hell happened to the MC and his wife, how can you just end it was there. You need to continue this novel, it's very promising and I was so engrossed into it.

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Phantom_Nova

Overall I liked this novel for the relationships and the calculating main character. However the ONLY reason I made this review was to warn of the absolutely horrid ending. There is no closure on anything. You don’t know what happens to the MC, or any of his friends. And the only people it does talk about it talks about really in a really shallow manner. Hell even the fight was a little on the lame side. Anyways I really enjoyed everything else about the novel.

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Neilstone

The translation is fine, but the story could use a lot of work. Different from a lot of assassin reincarnation stories, the beginning shows that the author has at least a baseline understanding of how assassins would actually operate. That just makes it worse when the assassin becomes a brawler after reincarnation. He also immediately emotionally ties himself to the first people he meets, such a surprise that they need house help shortly afterwards, forcing him to act like a bodyguard instead of an assassin.

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GrandGuardian

A good novel. The ending is very disappointing (in my opinion). THE ENDING IS SO FRUSTRATING!!!!! Anyways, it was 'good'. Abcdefghijklmnopqrstuvwxyz

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Mirian_Aragon

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AzureSky7

Frankly I like a novel that has a MC with one wife. He knows he’s cold, ruthless, and unromantic but at least he can stay in character and his heart can only hold one female. And please people he only gradually shows more emotions after eating tears of unicorn.

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Blske
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The book does not flow from chapter to chapter or even in the same chapter often I was left wondering if a portion of the book had been skipped

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Nick_Stratton

Neither death nor dawn can separate us. In my time, you will be immortal. Pure romance of vampire prince and human girl are updated DAILY on WebComics.

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Derpyvader_Boi

I believe that this story is yes yes yes yes yes yes I have not read this blah blah blah blah blah ooga boogaaa I play Minecraft u uncultured swine.

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Hender

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Melanie_Staercke

The writing style is a nice Mix of predictable and non predictable Story elements and has plenty of characters that develop a lot as well as an open ending

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Holy_Holly

I just started this story but I have to say I’m rather intrigued by it. I’ve read many story’s where our MC is quite righteous and good but I like the fact that this MC is an assassin so I’d assume ruthless

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Dao_of_mischeif

What is wrong with this guy..................................................

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Daoist3666663

Reading the title of the novel, I had expected the assassin to be an Oriental assassin but unfortunately not. Although the MC had been reincarnated from hell, he is not OP which made me a bit disappointed. He did retain his memories from when he was on Earth and Hell as well as his assassination skills, he does not have magical or sword qi

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cedrike21

From what I read and discovered in the first chapters, the quality is there. I will continue the adventure. It is not an innovation in the genre, but it can become a good reference. Thank you

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Kasier
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Disappointing. There was no real storyline and characters change based on plot convenience. The story jumps around endlessly. And important plot twists are left unexplaimed.

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Heaven4ever

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aaelite2

Hi, This is Tynan, I am an editor from another platform that focuses on adventurous Genre Fictions. After reading your “Assassin's Chronicle”, I decided to contact you and if possible, to extend you an invitation on distributing your works. However, there are so little I can talk about it here. If you were interested, please contact me via geekyteddyyo@gmail.com, then I should take opportunity to discuss it with you in detail. It was a great pleasure to meet your story. Sincerely Tynan

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Sajaya_Kumar

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Muhammad_Bello_9797

What the hell happened to the MC and his wife, how can you just end it was there. You need to continue this novel, it's very promising and I was so engrossed into it.

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Phantom_Nova

Overall I liked this novel for the relationships and the calculating main character. However the ONLY reason I made this review was to warn of the absolutely horrid ending. There is no closure on anything. You don’t know what happens to the MC, or any of his friends. And the only people it does talk about it talks about really in a really shallow manner. Hell even the fight was a little on the lame side. Anyways I really enjoyed everything else about the novel.

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Neilstone

The translation is fine, but the story could use a lot of work. Different from a lot of assassin reincarnation stories, the beginning shows that the author has at least a baseline understanding of how assassins would actually operate. That just makes it worse when the assassin becomes a brawler after reincarnation. He also immediately emotionally ties himself to the first people he meets, such a surprise that they need house help shortly afterwards, forcing him to act like a bodyguard instead of an assassin.

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GrandGuardian

A good novel. The ending is very disappointing (in my opinion). THE ENDING IS SO FRUSTRATING!!!!! Anyways, it was 'good'. Abcdefghijklmnopqrstuvwxyz

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Mirian_Aragon

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Lyriker
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AzureSky7

Frankly I like a novel that has a MC with one wife. He knows he’s cold, ruthless, and unromantic but at least he can stay in character and his heart can only hold one female. And please people he only gradually shows more emotions after eating tears of unicorn.

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Blske
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The book does not flow from chapter to chapter or even in the same chapter often I was left wondering if a portion of the book had been skipped

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Nick_Stratton

Neither death nor dawn can separate us. In my time, you will be immortal. Pure romance of vampire prince and human girl are updated DAILY on WebComics.

5yr
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Derpyvader_Boi

I believe that this story is yes yes yes yes yes yes I have not read this blah blah blah blah blah ooga boogaaa I play Minecraft u uncultured swine.

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Hender

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leech_
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Melanie_Staercke

The writing style is a nice Mix of predictable and non predictable Story elements and has plenty of characters that develop a lot as well as an open ending

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Holy_Holly

I just started this story but I have to say I’m rather intrigued by it. I’ve read many story’s where our MC is quite righteous and good but I like the fact that this MC is an assassin so I’d assume ruthless

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Dao_of_mischeif

What is wrong with this guy..................................................

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Daoist3666663

Reading the title of the novel, I had expected the assassin to be an Oriental assassin but unfortunately not. Although the MC had been reincarnated from hell, he is not OP which made me a bit disappointed. He did retain his memories from when he was on Earth and Hell as well as his assassination skills, he does not have magical or sword qi

5yr
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cedrike21

From what I read and discovered in the first chapters, the quality is there. I will continue the adventure. It is not an innovation in the genre, but it can become a good reference. Thank you

5yr
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Kasier
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Disappointing. There was no real storyline and characters change based on plot convenience. The story jumps around endlessly. And important plot twists are left unexplaimed.

5yr
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Heaven4ever

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