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Una historia muy buena, un poco apresurada, pero se entiende porque el protagonista tiene muchas cosas por hacer y poco tiempo para lograrlo. No es como en otras historias en las que los protagonistas se preparan durante años, tampoco noté que hubiera problemas con respecto a los personajes secundarios, no son muchos capítulos pero la historia parece interesante.
gonna put 5 stars here and like your profile just because you gave us the raws without anyone asking for it.
It is an excellent story that, although at first I had doubts, now I see that it has a lot of potential and can make the bad taste left by the end of the original series change to be something better and interesting.
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Very good story so far I hope you continue bringing more chapters and don't stop PLAP PLAP PLAP PLAP PLAP PLAP PLAP PLAP PLAP PLAP PLAP PLAP
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Una historia muy buena, un poco apresurada, pero se entiende porque el protagonista tiene muchas cosas por hacer y poco tiempo para lograrlo. No es como en otras historias en las que los protagonistas se preparan durante años, tampoco noté que hubiera problemas con respecto a los personajes secundarios, no son muchos capítulos pero la historia parece interesante.
gonna put 5 stars here and like your profile just because you gave us the raws without anyone asking for it.
It is an excellent story that, although at first I had doubts, now I see that it has a lot of potential and can make the bad taste left by the end of the original series change to be something better and interesting.
[img=Cries][img=Envy][img=Good night][img=angry][img=gift][img=golden ticket][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=Cries][img=Envy][img=Good night][img=angry][img=gift][img=golden ticket][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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Well not bad so far the best Lol story I've ever read[img=update]Well not bad so far the best Lol story I've ever read[img=update]Well not bad so far the best Lol story I've ever read[img=update]
Very good story so far I hope you continue bringing more chapters and don't stop PLAP PLAP PLAP PLAP PLAP PLAP PLAP PLAP PLAP PLAP PLAP PLAP
Damn good storie Damn good storie Damn good storie Damn good storie Damn good storie Damn good storie Damn good storie Damn good storie Damn good storie
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