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I like some aspects of this story and can't wait to see how it evolves. My favorite parts are the game system and the skill allocation system. The detective twist is a bit unusual, but I think it's a nice and original twist.
I like some aspects of this story and can't wait to see how it evolves. My favorite parts are the game system and the skill allocation system. The detective twist is a bit unusual, but I think it's a nice and original twist.