DC: Rise Of The Kryptonian Tyrant

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WuQian

Mc was captured as soon as he landed. What made this an enjoyable read for me so far was the way he manipulated everyone to escape. I also hope Jenny survives, even though I feel like it will be detrimental to bardi, but I hope he won't be inhumane enough to kill her. Anyways, I look forward to reading this.

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Junkdog_786

This follows the story of an evil and cunning MC. He's also pretty smart too though, I won't say THAT smart because he makes some pretty basic mistakes later on. But regardless, I think it's a good story, so give it a try. As always, if you notice any mistakes, let me know in the comments, and I'll fix them. Have a nice read.

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John_Whie

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Generic_007

Mother fucker, write your own novel already. This shit was phenomenal, i say. You don't need to copy off someone else work. And grammar was top notch as well.