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摘要
Water is part of our body, they say it is life, but in the hands of our protagonist it becomes the most dangerous poison, the deadliest weapon and the most unpredictable thing.
Blood control, water temperature control, steam to fight and ice to throw! Have you stopped feeling your fingers? Oops, now they're purple, too bad. Want to emulate a certain super soldier? I'll make you popsicles or give you popsicles!
Water is quite unpredictable and ever-changing, and although much of it was explored in the original series, Shisui has an idea of the interesting things you can do with this element.
But before all that fun, why the hell was a Waterbender born in the Fire Nation?
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Is obvius that this Fanfic is an AU.
English is my second language and I'm using Grammarly for thoses mistakes I didn't see, so, if you notice one, comment, please!
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I don't generally write many reviews, but this is by far one of the best avatar fan fictions so far, the way his reincarnation is handled, the changes in characters attitudes and how they interact, while they differ from the show, we're shown why through the way the MC interacts with others, the changes he's made, etc. The way the author explains why the firelord (both of them) believe in the words of a child, the conversation with the past avatars (which as of chapter 15, I hope affects aangs knowledge of him) The changes in zuko and azula, the latter of which I always felt bad for in the show, makes sense given the different environment, and the change in temperament of ozai. overall, other than some spelling or grammar mistakes here and there, this is a wonderful story of a guy that, while harboring some of the grudges and feelings of his past life, is trying his best to move on and just make the world he's in a better place without the worry of "plot knowledge", which he has, but doesn't care about.
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this story is really amazing. long chapter, interesting story line, very good character interactions, and more importantly MC has his brain still healthy... he knew very what he is doing, not outright rejecting fire nation like some other FF. the only flaw is lacking chapter, so i would like to asking the AUTHOR about More chapter please....
Without much discussion, 5 stars for this new novel. Do not read anyone’s opinions or any other nonsense. Go and read the novel with a heart of steel.
The story gets better every time I read the chapters, I can't even wait for more chapters. ...............................................................................
It's a very good read so far, I hope the story continues as it has and doesn't get dropped.
A unique take on the Avatar world. I love how it focuses on the world building and the advancements the fire nation is making. Also how the royal family is not so dysfunctional anymore. And from the bottom of my heart I thank thee for not using chatgpt to edit the story. I loath those stories with it even though the concept of the whole story is excellent. Thank you for using grammarly.
I already love this I never see Avatar fox’s actually try and use science in the way this fic is I hope this story will not get drop
The story unfolded beautifully, weaving a rich tapestry of emotions and experiences that captivated my imagination. Each character was thoughtfully constructed, with intricate backstories and distinct personalities that brought them to life. The plot was intricately layered, filled with unexpected twists and turns that kept me on the edge of my seat. Overall, the narrative left a lasting impression.
The story is getting better with each chapter ....................................................................................................................
A unique character premise done correctly. No harem. No power hungry spotlight hog. Only a good person and his friends. If you read this fic prepare to gush over some beautiful story telling. 10 out of 10. Truly exquisite.
Very good story if updated more often would be 5 stars ..................................................... ............................................. ................................... ........................... ................ ........ .... .. .
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Finally, a decent avatar post. The mc is kinda op but its still good as he stays grounded and wants to live a little as a kid, while still making a difference. Overall, highly recommend.
Something interesting about this fic in particular, is how it's given the ability to portray both diversity and the political landscape of the fire nation beyond what we've seen in shows and some books
Giving it 5 stars so far, has a lot of potential. I hoping this story develops well, I’m liking the fact that the royal family is different from cannon
Me gusta esto, sigue así que vas por buen camino. Aunque es un molestia escribir reseñas, usualmente no lo hago pero este libro me gustó mucho.
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- 1 1: Shisui. 27 days ago
- 2 2: Boiling Water. 27 days ago
- 3 3: Real purposes. 27 days ago
- 4 4: Even in this world, you must go to school. 26 days ago
- 5 5: Shisui vs Azula. 25 days ago
- 6 6: Steam Power! 24 days ago
- 7 7: Stars. 22 days ago
- 8 8: Full Moon. 19 days ago
- 9 9: Spear, Sword and Fire. 17 days ago
- 10 10: About Chi. 15 days ago
- 11 11: A new young sister, Kiyi. 14 days ago
- 12 12: Relax in the school. 12 days ago
- 13 13: Azula's blue fire. 10 days ago
- 14 14: Sword Heart. 8 days ago
- 15 15: Chaotic Water. 6 days ago
- 16 16: In the Army. 4 days ago
- 17 17: Blood-Bending and Ba Sing Se war. 2 days ago
- 18 18: The Enlightened One. 4 hours ago
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