摘要
The world of Avatar is about to see a change that will shake it to its foundations. Will the avatar be able to bring balance back to the world or will the Tower change its very foundations.
A man from our world is transported to the world of avatar being given command of his own tower bringing the wonderous world of classes and magic to his new world.
Please keep comments civil but criticism is welcome
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I do not own the Avatar the last Airbender or any of its characters this is a fan fiction*
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AUTHOR THIS NOVEL NEEDS MORE, MODERN TECHNOLOGY..CAN THE MC GET A SKILL FOR ONLY SUMMON TECHNOLOGY LIKE MECHA AND OTHER THINGS LIKE WARSHIPS OR SPACE SHIPS......................................................................................................
AUTHOR AFTER READING ALL 15 CHAPTER THE STORY IS A+ FOR FUN.author just do not FxUxCxK UP AND QUIT AND WASTE MY TIME AND DESTROY MY FUN DREAM...AUTHOR THIS NOVEL NEEDS TO BE MULTIVERSE OR GIVE THE MC THE POWER TO SUMMON OTHER CHARACTERS OR THINGS FROM OTHER WORLDS LIKE MASS EFFECT,, ARE GIRLS LIKE HER GHISLAINE FROM MUSHOKU TENSEI ANIME
Es un concepto muy prometedor en si me gastaría mas capítulos pero es cosa mia estoy acostumbrado a leer fanfic ya casi acabados con cientos de capítulos pero este fanfic esta muy bien pensado y si lo hacen bien puede ser muyyy bueno
Very good story but mc is an idiot the guy have power but don’t use them his meek and your are already in the 12 chapter but the mc do stupid decisions one after one I want to 🤯🤬 Man the story can be so much more but the mc I want to teleport in the story stop his invincible and slap him a dozen a time and tell man up and do something good for once like for real the guy can teleport in every place but when he go to the earth kingdom he go in abandoned street not in the palace to give himself a edge no he have to go where is alone to then be arrest and be treated like a criminal for a couple hours then go met the king but if he just teleport in the palace in front the king and use what all the people think already just say his a spirit and his the owner of the tour and say he come to the king tell him that the fire kingdom already use it and if he want to fight them at equal or even win again them just go to my tower and become stronger
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I really like the concept that this story introduces. It's got me hooked. A bit more time on writing quality would be appreciated though.
卷 1
- 1 Death 17 days ago
- 2 Tower 17 days ago
- 3 People 17 days ago
- 4 Leveling 17 days ago
- 5 New people 17 days ago
- 6 Climbing 16 days ago
- 7 Floor 4 15 days ago
- 8 Chosen Class 15 days ago
- 9 Preparations 14 days ago
- 10 Discussions 14 days ago
- 11 Omashu 13 days ago
- 12 A Crazy King 12 days ago
- 13 Impending guests 12 days ago
- 14 Dungeons and Abilities 11 days ago
- 15 Firebending class 11 days ago
- 16 A meeting of Representatives 11 days ago
- 17 An invitation and an idea 10 days ago
- 18 A Chief's choice 9 days ago
- 19 Newcomers 8 days ago
- 20 First level 6 days ago
- 21 Chief's on board 6 days ago
- 22 Guild: Part 1 5 days ago
- 23 Guild: Part Two 5 days ago
- 24 Progress 4 days ago
- 25 Tutorial 4 days ago
- 26 People 3 days ago
- 27 Impending meeting 3 days ago
- 28 Titans 2 days ago
- 29 Departure 2 days ago
- 30 Before the future 2 days ago
hello author here. just wanted to add a review. if you have the time please leave one it would be very helpful for future chapters.