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it's a good story, but the characters come earlier than they should like how they already have Nishinoya and coach Ukai at the start. but it does make it clear who is talking/thinking and what emotion or actions they are doing at the time. It also doesn't mention where the mc lives or his background. overall, it is a good story, but there were things that weren't mentioned or were confusing.
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it's a good story, but the characters come earlier than they should like how they already have Nishinoya and coach Ukai at the start. but it does make it clear who is talking/thinking and what emotion or actions they are doing at the time. It also doesn't mention where the mc lives or his background. overall, it is a good story, but there were things that weren't mentioned or were confusing.
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