As a Gamer In DxD World

LV 3

ScrambledEgg

Average, or maybe slightly below average. Too much plot hole from the story 1. Mc got a cook skill book but he couldn't cook, even just to cut a vegetable he couldn't do it. 2. Somehow he able to use magic, sword etc even tho he never learned to do it or have a skill about it 3. He have auto regen, he's able to heal the injury from the monster in his dungeon but he couldn't heal his hand from his cooking practice, even after he got a magic item to double his regeneration. 4. Koneko is hard to befriend with, but somehow mc able to befriend her the first time they meet, to the point she became a talkative person different from her canon 5. Mc character is fluctuate, change from one after another, he said he like to cause trouble, brave enough to skip some class and fight other but every time he meet koneko he becomes coward. 6. The letter from the Unknown deity is annoying, usually that kind of thing only happen once, when mc reincarnated, but in this ff every time something new happen mc always got some letter

LV 4

Imjustadev

writing quality is average, the story has many plot holes, some scenes are never explained and written but it's explained with that happend, tge mc's personality shifts constantly

LV 14

NightCrown

next Gamer fanfiction whose intelligence Stat is worth shit.

LV 3

Mamameste

It seems that the author forgot to upload many chapters because the little history he has has many holes in the story [img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

LV 14

LordRavenclaw

overall the mc is braindead who also happens to be a bitch. he stutters and shi all the time because of koneko. he has no backbone when it comes to talking to ppl. it feels like he doesn't know the nature of characters but knows the plot. he got a cooking skill for the first novice gift and within the next couple chapter simply doesn't know how to cut vegetables like wtf. grammar is fine tho so if this is something you like go for it but im officially out

LV 13

Sokanas

Inconsistent, out of character / unreal behavior for in-world characters, MC is an isekai that has somehow inherited a memories of physical and emotional abuse which is brought up a bunch and its so fucking cringe. MC has fast stat growth but the stats don't mean shit. MC has skills like cooking but still can't cook and self-harms while cooking. Writing quality is mid

LV 14

Daoistr887D1

DROPPED THE MOMENT HE LET OTHER IN THE DUNGEON DONT CARE IF THEY ARE DATING ITS PURE STUPID

LV 4

StupidUserName

It is a fun reading even if it deviates from my usual selfish cocky protagonists that I normally enjoy for fanfics. It should be warned the mc comes from an abusive family before reincarnation and it does impact the story so if you aren’t into that stuff, it would probably be best to avoid this. (I am not sure if this is a spoiler or not be the signs are everywhere and it was revealed early on). Also, the main(?) romance in my opinion was a bit rushed but that stuff doesn’t really bother me but it is something that some people may not like. /shrug

LV 4

Lyle_Herbst

Each work, story, and writing improves with new things

LV 11

mike_w_0544

I started reading this and it was over before i noticed it. I am not sure on update times but the story itself has promise. It's not some OP MC yet. But in all its a pretty good read. None of the he/she him/her swaps which i find completely annoying. But anyways if u want to kill some time give it a try.

LV 6

DaoistHerbz

holy shit! this book sucks. it's like the MC's int got stuck at 1.

LV 15

Nutcruncher_442

Overall story idea is nice but could be polished abit. Main problem is your execution. Explaining on his background or possible truma he suffers in the status just dropping it in out of thin air. give it a rewrite to polish the story and fix holes in the plot it will be amazing, you could write longer chapters with a bigger wait time I'm pretty sure most people won't mind.

LV 4

John_Rex_98

DXD forward and beyond the galaxy let's go

LV 4

Sandip_Kar_9157

I like this novel very much .I want more chapters. good luck and thank you for the novel.

LV 2

aruther_Pendragon

interesting, but there are a lot of plot holes. I like the story so far, even with all the plot holes

LV 14

Rysian

GOOD fanfiction ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------