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Peak philosphy🔥🔥 ye oil up the mc! Make em feel the grind and the pain, make it a fight through diamonds🔥🔥👨🚒🔥 ye but reading it maybe fix the way you describe things, its kinda confusing and you reiterate the same idea too much, the first chap is barely recognizable from how long the paragraphs are, maybe add some plot points but if its just an auxiliarry chap it could work, but now since uts the first chap nothing is actually happening
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A deep dive into human emotions, Voreal is a thought-provoking exploration of pain and perseverance. The narrative offers a unique perspective on the human condition. While the pacing may be slow at times, the character development make it a worthwhile read. If you’re into emotional stories that challenge the reader, Voreal is a must try.
Peak philosphy🔥🔥 ye oil up the mc! Make em feel the grind and the pain, make it a fight through diamonds🔥🔥👨🚒🔥 ye but reading it maybe fix the way you describe things, its kinda confusing and you reiterate the same idea too much, the first chap is barely recognizable from how long the paragraphs are, maybe add some plot points but if its just an auxiliarry chap it could work, but now since uts the first chap nothing is actually happening
揭示劇透
A deep dive into human emotions, Voreal is a thought-provoking exploration of pain and perseverance. The narrative offers a unique perspective on the human condition. While the pacing may be slow at times, the character development make it a worthwhile read. If you’re into emotional stories that challenge the reader, Voreal is a must try.