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It's alright for being a translation, but the way of speaking ruins the story for me.
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Li dois capítulos e não consegui continuar, muito chinês para o meu gosto (não tenho nada contra chinês, tirando suas histórias e modo de viver)
Definitivly a chinese translation. Mc is too confident / shameless, and cliche chinese mc. The women get’s chinese’ified personality that doesn’t mix with how they originally are, which should have them just be oc’s instead. Writing quality : fine, but to much of a chinese cliche to stomach. Update stability : could only stomach around 15 chapters before it went past my limit for the story. Story development: interesting start, and a rarely seen system. Character design: chinesefy the characters, too much pride and ‘thirst’, and shamelessness, and not even the good kind. World development: again, only read 15 chapters, but ‘slightly’ interesting world. Overall review : read if you can handle shameless thirsty chinese character.
It's alright for being a translation, but the way of speaking ruins the story for me.
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Li dois capítulos e não consegui continuar, muito chinês para o meu gosto (não tenho nada contra chinês, tirando suas histórias e modo de viver)
Definitivly a chinese translation. Mc is too confident / shameless, and cliche chinese mc. The women get’s chinese’ified personality that doesn’t mix with how they originally are, which should have them just be oc’s instead. Writing quality : fine, but to much of a chinese cliche to stomach. Update stability : could only stomach around 15 chapters before it went past my limit for the story. Story development: interesting start, and a rarely seen system. Character design: chinesefy the characters, too much pride and ‘thirst’, and shamelessness, and not even the good kind. World development: again, only read 15 chapters, but ‘slightly’ interesting world. Overall review : read if you can handle shameless thirsty chinese character.