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author, can't you rewrite the novel for when mc is born as a baby, it's really annoying that everyone in the family gets suspicious every time mc does something?
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author, can't you rewrite the novel for when mc is born as a baby, it's really annoying that everyone in the family gets suspicious every time mc does something?
The writing is good, no grammar mistakes, and it's a good story. GOOD NOVEL!!!!!!!!GOOD NOVEL!!!!!!!!GOOD NOVEL!!!!!!!!GOOD NOVEL!!!!!!!!GOOD NOVEL!!!!!!!!GOOD NOVEL!!!!!!!!GOOD NOVEL!!!!!!!!GOOD NOVEL!!!!!!!!GOOD NOVEL!!!!!!!!GOOD NOVEL!!!!!!!!GOOD NOVEL!!!!!!!!GOOD NOVEL!!!!!!!!GOOD NOVEL!!!!!!!!GOOD NOVEL!!!!!!!!GOOD NOVEL!!!!!!!!GOOD NOVEL!!!!!!!!
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