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The story is great so far and as long as you don't drop this can definitely become one of the best shadow slave fanfics. I also love his true name and the fact that he's from a legacy clan
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Hey Don’t abandon the book It’s pretty good Though do make the chapters longer.
The story is great so far and as long as you don't drop this can definitely become one of the best shadow slave fanfics. I also love his true name and the fact that he's from a legacy clan
Esta buenoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo creo
Hey Don’t abandon the book It’s pretty good Though do make the chapters longer.