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Great chapter bro[img=Loving it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Loving it]
I love telltale and I cant wait to see what this story has to offer/ im praying you've done my main man lee justice and of course im hoping the mc is smart
An interesting story, the only bad thing is some disturbing moments, the MC is not very intelligent either.
heureusement que je programme la sauvegarde dans mon ordi avec le nom de l'auteur, sinon j'aurai pas retrouver l'histoire j'aurai juste supprimé celui que tu as enlever.
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Usually, when reading a story, you associate yourself with the main character. The author of this fanfic managed to achieve that it is absolutely impossible to associate yourself with the hero of this story. A very dull and gray MC - a drama queen, no charisma, no wisdom, no coolness. Controversial decisions, no authority in the group. And drama, a lot, a lot of drama, in each chapter there is constant drama, which is already sickening. I wanted to see the story of a man's ascent, and not the constant internal experiences of a little crying girl in a man's body.
Great chapter bro[img=Loving it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Loving it]
I love telltale and I cant wait to see what this story has to offer/ im praying you've done my main man lee justice and of course im hoping the mc is smart
An interesting story, the only bad thing is some disturbing moments, the MC is not very intelligent either.
heureusement que je programme la sauvegarde dans mon ordi avec le nom de l'auteur, sinon j'aurai pas retrouver l'histoire j'aurai juste supprimé celui que tu as enlever.
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Usually, when reading a story, you associate yourself with the main character. The author of this fanfic managed to achieve that it is absolutely impossible to associate yourself with the hero of this story. A very dull and gray MC - a drama queen, no charisma, no wisdom, no coolness. Controversial decisions, no authority in the group. And drama, a lot, a lot of drama, in each chapter there is constant drama, which is already sickening. I wanted to see the story of a man's ascent, and not the constant internal experiences of a little crying girl in a man's body.