3評論
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
與他人分享您的想法
寫檢討
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You are a good writer and I hope you continue the story for a long time and try peatron
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enjoying the story so far, I hope you continue it. The best thing was you said brother and sister instead of making it some weird step-family relationship. The character handling claire was pretty awesome
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You are a good writer and I hope you continue the story for a long time and try peatron
enjoying the story so far, I hope you continue it. The best thing was you said brother and sister instead of making it some weird step-family relationship. The character handling claire was pretty awesome