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As always absolutely amazing work! Pretty much read everything that this author has posted and reread some of his stuff multiple times. The blend of Night City and Star Wars is, to be perfectly honest, preen AF! Can't wait for more
other than the time skips being a little aggressive and not clear as to how much time has passed especially the one where we skip to David's situation the whole book is just in cyberpunk words preem 10 out of 10
your last few stories have been absolutely amazing reads. and from what I see this one will be no different. amazing mixed universe, cool powers, and a well fleshed out MC. Atom is strong, with the potential to bend the entire cyberpunk/star wars setting over his knee. but it's balanced with his improving but still unstable mind and lack of social skills. can't wait to see where this one goes!
Mandatory 5 stars, known for his fire work… but on the DL, but will your GGG or your 40k fic be seeing updates?
This is honestly one of the best mash up ideas I’ve heard of! Please keep updating. I can’t wait to see if the galaxy can handle the absolut shit show that is our boy’s crew 😁
only have a couple chapters so far but they are both just packed full of content so you can already get a pretty solid feel for the novel. The blend of Cyberpunk and Star Wars seems a bit superficial still, feels more like Nar Shadda with some names changed, but it still early so I'm sure it will be more distinct later on. The characters seems pretty solid, nice backstory and personality. as always the writing quality is amazing, and the chapters are beefy. I really can't wait to read some more, it's got me hooked.
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Obligatory 5-star author self-review... But yay, new story! I'm excited to finally be sharing this one publicly. I've been writing it for my pat reon for about a month now. It's great fun. I hope you enjoy it as much as I have.
I was a bit hesitant to read this because I haven't played cyberpunk much and haven't seen a crossover done really well with it. But this fic blew my expectations away and turned out to be so good. Now, onto the review. The mc is a bit edgy, so keep that in mind, but he has depth and isn't just another cringe emo protagonist. This fic does a great job of showing the relationships between the characters and does great world building. I will admit that the first chapters, while not bad, were a slow burn. But other than that, just give it a read, you won't regret it.
As always absolutely amazing work! Pretty much read everything that this author has posted and reread some of his stuff multiple times. The blend of Night City and Star Wars is, to be perfectly honest, preen AF! Can't wait for more
other than the time skips being a little aggressive and not clear as to how much time has passed especially the one where we skip to David's situation the whole book is just in cyberpunk words preem 10 out of 10
your last few stories have been absolutely amazing reads. and from what I see this one will be no different. amazing mixed universe, cool powers, and a well fleshed out MC. Atom is strong, with the potential to bend the entire cyberpunk/star wars setting over his knee. but it's balanced with his improving but still unstable mind and lack of social skills. can't wait to see where this one goes!
Mandatory 5 stars, known for his fire work… but on the DL, but will your GGG or your 40k fic be seeing updates?
This is honestly one of the best mash up ideas I’ve heard of! Please keep updating. I can’t wait to see if the galaxy can handle the absolut shit show that is our boy’s crew 😁
only have a couple chapters so far but they are both just packed full of content so you can already get a pretty solid feel for the novel. The blend of Cyberpunk and Star Wars seems a bit superficial still, feels more like Nar Shadda with some names changed, but it still early so I'm sure it will be more distinct later on. The characters seems pretty solid, nice backstory and personality. as always the writing quality is amazing, and the chapters are beefy. I really can't wait to read some more, it's got me hooked.
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Obligatory 5-star author self-review... But yay, new story! I'm excited to finally be sharing this one publicly. I've been writing it for my pat reon for about a month now. It's great fun. I hope you enjoy it as much as I have.
I was a bit hesitant to read this because I haven't played cyberpunk much and haven't seen a crossover done really well with it. But this fic blew my expectations away and turned out to be so good. Now, onto the review. The mc is a bit edgy, so keep that in mind, but he has depth and isn't just another cringe emo protagonist. This fic does a great job of showing the relationships between the characters and does great world building. I will admit that the first chapters, while not bad, were a slow burn. But other than that, just give it a read, you won't regret it.