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Everything save writing quality is amazing. Nice and long chapters. Worth reading for sure.
good fanfic to entertain. We have to wait for the development of Dumbodore, who logically is the villain of the world of Harry Potter.
This is a very interesting story but please improve translation, as everything else is ok by me........................................................
This is one of my most favorite Harry Potter fanfics in a long time! I truly hope you continue the story, as I can’t wait to dive into more chapters.
no es mala la lei completa en patreon solo unos pocos detalles que le quitan un poco la esencia del mundo original al final y tiene algo que hacen mucho los asiáticos y es que hacen al MC el centro de universo todo lo que hace es perfecto habla y habla maravillas regresa a ver a una mujer y se sonroja cosas asi pero en general es un buen fanfic
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Very good development so far, I love characters who know how to use what they have, which proves that in any universe, when you have money there are not many problems, I loved the perspective of an English aristocrat going to Hogwarts.
Buena historia, los agregados son interesante, no tengo quejas negativas que escribir, tal vez cuando conoció a Harry Potter y se comportó de manera extraña o que supiera poco sobre la historia y la confundiera con fanfiction, pero me dí cuenta que yo tengo el mismo problema, aunque conozco la historia, con el paso del tiempo ciertos detalles se me olvidaron y el leer tanto fanfiction llego a confundir el contenido falso con el material de la obra original.
Very good development so far, I love characters who know how to use what they have, which proves that in any universe, when you have money there are not many problems, I loved the perspective of an English aristocrat going to Hogwarts, It's the first time I've seen a style going like this, and the author's writing is pretty decent, just a little annoying that the protagonist doesn't remember the plot
good book just hope the author doesn't drop or stop making chapters as he is known to do
puffender [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update]
揭示劇透 Everything save writing quality is amazing. Nice and long chapters. Worth reading for sure.
good fanfic to entertain. We have to wait for the development of Dumbodore, who logically is the villain of the world of Harry Potter.
This is a very interesting story but please improve translation, as everything else is ok by me........................................................
This is one of my most favorite Harry Potter fanfics in a long time! I truly hope you continue the story, as I can’t wait to dive into more chapters.
no es mala la lei completa en patreon solo unos pocos detalles que le quitan un poco la esencia del mundo original al final y tiene algo que hacen mucho los asiáticos y es que hacen al MC el centro de universo todo lo que hace es perfecto habla y habla maravillas regresa a ver a una mujer y se sonroja cosas asi pero en general es un buen fanfic
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Very good development so far, I love characters who know how to use what they have, which proves that in any universe, when you have money there are not many problems, I loved the perspective of an English aristocrat going to Hogwarts.
Buena historia, los agregados son interesante, no tengo quejas negativas que escribir, tal vez cuando conoció a Harry Potter y se comportó de manera extraña o que supiera poco sobre la historia y la confundiera con fanfiction, pero me dí cuenta que yo tengo el mismo problema, aunque conozco la historia, con el paso del tiempo ciertos detalles se me olvidaron y el leer tanto fanfiction llego a confundir el contenido falso con el material de la obra original.
Very good development so far, I love characters who know how to use what they have, which proves that in any universe, when you have money there are not many problems, I loved the perspective of an English aristocrat going to Hogwarts, It's the first time I've seen a style going like this, and the author's writing is pretty decent, just a little annoying that the protagonist doesn't remember the plot
good book just hope the author doesn't drop or stop making chapters as he is known to do
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