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this is confusing to read I dont know what part am I reading if it is harry potter or marvel................................................
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The writing quality is exeptional, I didn’t even know this was a translation until the mc talked about the signifisance of his name. The plot is good and for once it is a unique approach. For now the HP world is just more present would have liked to see how he trained his abilities in the Marvel world
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54. This is a really well thought out story, with a deep plot and new ideas for an hp ff. Mc shows what it means to inbody his houses meaning. Dear writer, I left an idea on chapter 54. Please go read it. The suggestion coincides with the link you have with mc, Harry, and Dora. It would pull them all to get her and give Harry family. Everyone likes to see when Harry has more family ties.
Really interesting concept and everything is well built...with hard working not op and smart mc...and focus on quidditch too!!......,.........
I read all the chapters released in two days, and I can say that the story is good and well written. Now I just have to wait for more chapters... PS: I'm using Google translate.👍
Sorry to break it to you but I think this is already being translated. I think its titled "Marvel's Master of Heavenly Magic" by Draco_. It has around 130+ chapters right now.
The story is great so far good character, development, and well written .👍
Love this book. Your version is so much better. I'll switch to your version since its so much better . This fic is also being translated by user Draco_ here in webnovel with the title being "Marvel's Magic of Heavenly Master" currently at chapter 139.
I'm hungry for the chapters so looking forward to next upcoming mass release yea😀😀😀
am just go there and say great work. now all we need is another 100 chapter release at once. cause am hungry so cook me more ...
A new project! I uploaded 34 chapters in one go so please read it until then. It's fun and I assure you that you will be hooked!!! LET'S FREAKING GOOOOOO!!!
this is confusing to read I dont know what part am I reading if it is harry potter or marvel................................................
揭示劇透 The writing quality is exeptional, I didn’t even know this was a translation until the mc talked about the signifisance of his name. The plot is good and for once it is a unique approach. For now the HP world is just more present would have liked to see how he trained his abilities in the Marvel world
揭示劇透 54. This is a really well thought out story, with a deep plot and new ideas for an hp ff. Mc shows what it means to inbody his houses meaning. Dear writer, I left an idea on chapter 54. Please go read it. The suggestion coincides with the link you have with mc, Harry, and Dora. It would pull them all to get her and give Harry family. Everyone likes to see when Harry has more family ties.
Really interesting concept and everything is well built...with hard working not op and smart mc...and focus on quidditch too!!......,.........
I read all the chapters released in two days, and I can say that the story is good and well written. Now I just have to wait for more chapters... PS: I'm using Google translate.👍
Sorry to break it to you but I think this is already being translated. I think its titled "Marvel's Master of Heavenly Magic" by Draco_. It has around 130+ chapters right now.
The story is great so far good character, development, and well written .👍
Love this book. Your version is so much better. I'll switch to your version since its so much better . This fic is also being translated by user Draco_ here in webnovel with the title being "Marvel's Magic of Heavenly Master" currently at chapter 139.
I'm hungry for the chapters so looking forward to next upcoming mass release yea😀😀😀
am just go there and say great work. now all we need is another 100 chapter release at once. cause am hungry so cook me more ...
A new project! I uploaded 34 chapters in one go so please read it until then. It's fun and I assure you that you will be hooked!!! LET'S FREAKING GOOOOOO!!!
Great story. Really enjoying it Thank you