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honestly there are some repetitive chapter's or chapter's that are basically the same as previous but in different words... I do wonder the name of original because translation is quite good
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is this like the Chinese novel, Jagged Germany? Quite cool, anyway hopefully the translation and slight grammar error will be corrected 😉
LV 4 ![Badge]()
honestly there are some repetitive chapter's or chapter's that are basically the same as previous but in different words... I do wonder the name of original because translation is quite good
is this like the Chinese novel, Jagged Germany? Quite cool, anyway hopefully the translation and slight grammar error will be corrected 😉